【花翎个唱 北京怒放】亲们帮忙看看有没有语法错误~
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Candkie 楼主
your image always accumulating indistinctly in my dream i know you will come sometime and i can not predict maybe it will be a summer and then waiting can be stopped i feel the story of us just like the picture of the movie ah.....so beautiful it is that i can not believe you always run away when the time i want to stay with you the sincerity is torn up slowly by all the things around and only leaving the yearning which let me feel tired soon stop dreaming,it is poor as a match ignite it sometimes and instantly put it out i am afraid of the coming of it,i am afraid of the voice of breaking down
2008年09月07日 10点09分 1
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Candkie 楼主
your image always accumulating indistinctly in my dream i know you will come sometime and i can not predict maybe it will be a summer and then waiting can be stopped i feel the story of us just like the picture of the movie ah.....so beautiful it is that i can not believe you always run away when the time i want to stay with you the sincerity is torn up slowly by all the things around and only leaving the yearning which let me feel tired soon stop dreaming,it is poor as a match ignite it sometimes and instantly put it out afraid of the coming of itAfraid of hearing the voice of breaking… 谢谢啦~因为我语法不好所以想练练~
2008年09月07日 10点09分 6
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