forest of shadows的A November Dream Obscured by night A forest of Shadows The silence of birds bringing peace The whispering night it calls my name And so I follow the path of unknown In solitude I wonder about Flakes of snow falling from the sky By the frozen lake she awaits my arrival That weeping angel of endless sorrow Under the starlit sky My eyes embraced by her beauty Aware of my presence She arise from her slumber I meet her crystal eyes A sad smile I behold As she melts into the everlasting night Moments In Solitude Embraced by darkness my abandoned soul Screams within my mind I see But darkness drowning in my misery Take me away to lands beyond this bleeding earth Thoose moments in solitude where my mind flies away Into the realm among the clouds where I rule my own life A kingdom for myself A place without fear and with no need for your gods Where I find eternal piece within my soul The realm among the clouds Where I wander in my moments of solitude But still I am falling through endless skies Skies of darkness obscured by reality That shrouds my life with hatred and lies Of Sorrow Blue Of sorrow blue and clad in mist Dancing midst the meadows of my dreams My precious one my fallen beauty Fallen beneath a dismal cloud I recall that dreary morning I ran to the shores of her eyes I was there watching the seas And it was all silent upon the sea A candle caravan The final stream of angel gleam There was no farewell of solace Before the caravan was gone Of sorrow blue and clad in tears Her cordial hands reach for me My peaceful dream her soothing warmth Fallen beneath a dismal cloud I bow to her beautiful name The flowers need not to be watered These tears wont let the soil dry Where her name is carved in stone You were my core you were my soul Lips of roses mane of gold Intoxicated we lay entwined I wore the carnal crown of sorrow Blue and clad in soil My mind still echoes from her songs Earth and time are calling my name Let me fall beneath this dismal cloud The Silent Cry Trapped inside walls of grief My dismal excistance I am longing for you, oh queen of my desire Alone I cry so silent Can you hear me Oh deliver me from my sorrow I feel so cold as I am drowning In a sea of darkness am I fading away Under The Dying Sun In the fields of green Her silhouette towards the sky Under the dying sun I see her die In the fields of green An arrow of death A dying beauty breathing Her last breath In the fields of green Under the dying sun I cry out In grief for my beloved one A symbol of life and hope she was to me Now pain and suffering is all I can see An act of vengeance for the deeds I've done Why must she pay with a life now gone I lay down beside her and gaze into the sky Eyes filled with tears why must she die In the fields of green Under the dying sun I cry out In grief for my beloved one Wish Awakened this dying season such a beauty to behold Oh autumn hath arrived a tragedy painted dead Fallen am I without thee I am lost In a region of doleful shades I am withering away I dwell in the shadows of life A dismal state of mind I'm in pain Oh sun I hate thy beams Leave me here to sleep and dream In the midst of falling leaves In a garden of endless grief I yearn for thee my precious one Beneath a pale grey sky I dream of your embrace How I wish I had yo near in this oh so dolorous life Where dreams turn to dust I have lost all my hope Of lasting pain and unpresent bliss This soul of mine I welcome thee Eternal sleep Silent advent of white death I feel so cold Silent advent of white death I feel so cold Crystallized tears falling still Oh autumn hath died Enshrouded am I in thy mist of endless gloom Enthralled am I by thy beauty How I wish how I wish In the midst of falling snow In a garden of endless grief My forlorn soul of misery Where peace and rest can never dwell Hope never comes I see no point in going on Still I dream but now I know I dream a lie so I close my eyes and I sigh A life of shattered dreams I can no longer bear I enter thee eternal sleep 工程浩大....麻烦了..

A November Dream Obscured by night A forest of Shadows - 影子森林 The silence of birds bringing peace 鸟雀噤声,寂静姗姗而来 The whispering night it calls my name 夜的呢喃,召唤着我的名字 And so I follow the path of unknown 我起身沿着不知名的小径 In solitude I wonder about 走入令人讶异的孤独 Flakes of snow falling from the sky 雪的精灵散落天幕By the frozen lake she awaits my arrival 她在结冰湖畔等我到来 That weeping angel of endless sorrow 泣泪的天使蕴着无尽的感伤Under the starlit sky 天穹的星辉照抚着她 My eyes embraced by her beauty 我的视界装满那凄美容颜Aware of my presence 仿佛感知我的存在 She arise from her slumber 惊吓到她的浅睡 I meet her crystal eyes 我沉迷那水晶般的眸子啊A sad smile I behold 且带哀伤且带着笑颜As she melts into the everlasting night 而她已融化进永夜的缠绵呵呵，大家分工，多多加油啊

我翻译WISH吧.明天交工..

Moments In Solitude - 独处时光 Embraced by darkness my abandoned soul 暗夜包裹着我被遗弃的魂灵Screams within my mind I see 我能听见它在内心尖叫的声音 But darkness drowning in my misery只是漆黑淹没了我的伤痛 Take me away to lands beyond this bleeding earth 带我远离这片血色浸染的土地 Those moments in solitude where my mind flies away 在那些许独处的时光，我的思绪渐渐飞离Into the realm among the clouds where I rule my own life 到达云霄之间的神域，在那里主导自己的生命A kingdom for myself 一个完全自我的王国A place without fear and with no need for your gods 全没有惊慌也不需神佑 Where I find eternal piece within my soul 为灵魂找到永久的安宁The realm among the clouds 那云霄之间的神域啊Where I wander in my moments of solitude 在我独处的时光里徜徉But still I am falling through endless skies 但仍然要跌落那无尽的黑暗Skies of darkness obscured by reality 现实遮蔽中黑暗的天渊That shrouds my life with hatred and lies我的世界从此覆盖怨恨与谰言

Wish 心愿 Awakened this dying season such a beauty to behold 唤醒这沉睡的季节,这是多么美好的事情 （awakened 这里是被动还是过去式？下文的arrived对应的话，应该是过去 翻译成唤醒） Oh autumn hath arrived a tragedy painted dead （hath 有 这里如果painted是动词的话，那dead就是副词 翻译成悲剧被完全描绘出，言下之意也就是悲剧跟随着秋天的到来，一起到来。） Fallen am I without thee I am lost 我因此而堕落了，没有你，我迷失了自我。 In a region of doleful shades I am withering away 在这寂寞的地方，我正渐渐消亡。 （doleful 寂寞，悲哀的 withering away 幻灭 shade 渐变） I dwell in the shadows of life 我活在生命的阴影中 A dismal state of mind I'm in pain 心中的那块凄凉之地使我痛苦 （dismal 凄凉的 be in pain 痛苦） Oh sun I hate thy beams Oh,太阳啊，我狠你，我恨你无私的光芒 Leave me here to sleep and dream 请让我沉眠梦中。 In the midst of falling leaves 独自守侯着秋日飘零的枯叶 （In the midst of 在。。。。中） In a garden of endless grief 在这充斥着无尽伤痛的花园中 （garden 花园，我一直在思考这里的garden是否暗喻着天堂，伊甸园） I yearn for thee my precious one 渴望见到我最珍爱的你。 （yearn for 渴望） Beneath a pale grey sky I dream of your embrace 在这苍白的苍穹下，是梦回你拥抱的我。 （Beneath 在。。。。下面） How I wish I had you near in this oh so dolorous life 在这悲伤的生命中，我是多么期盼着你在身边 Where dreams turn to dust I have lost all my hope 但我所有的梦想都化成灰烬，我迷失所有的希望of lasting pain and unpresent bliss 在这无尽的伤痛和上天无暇的眷顾中 This soul of mine I welcome thee 我孤独的灵魂期盼着你的归来 Eternal sleep 永恒沉睡把 Silent advent of white death 白色死神悄无声息地降临 I feel so cold 我好冷 Silent advent of white death 白色死神悄无声息地降临 I feel so cold 我真的好冷 Crystallized tears falling still 晶莹的泪珠仍然无声的淌落 Oh autumn hath died Oh,秋天已经消逝了 Enshrouded am I in thy mist of endless gloom 我依然沉迷在对你无尽思念的`阴霾中 Enthralled am I by thy beauty 我被你无暇的容貌征服 How I wish how I wish In the midst of falling snow 我是多么期望，期望着在这雪花飘零中 In a garden of endless grief 在这无尽悲伤的天堂中 （我一直在揣测这里的garden是否隐喻着伊甸园，天堂） My forlorn soul of misery 我那痛苦的，被遗弃的灵魂 Where peace and rest can never dwell 永远都住不进那安静祥和的居所 Hope never comes 希望永远都不会成功 I see no point in going on 我终于知道再继续也是徒劳罢了 （no point 可能是指希望） Still I dream but now I know 我依然梦想着，但如今我终于知道 I dream a lie so I close my eyes and I sigh 这是一个充满谎言的梦而已，于是我闭上双眸轻声叹息 A life of shattered dreams I can no longer bear 我再也不能忍受这个充满支离破碎梦的生活 （shattered 破碎，打碎） I enter thee eternal sleep 我只想一心沉醉在你那永恒的沉睡中。 http://wuya.org/test/01/(Forest%20of%20Shadows)wish.mp3 贴子相关图片: 作者： 伊然ζ 封 2007-4-24 11:08 　 回复此发言 删除

The Silent Cry - 沉寂的哭泣 Trapped inside walls of grief 忧伤是我的牢笼My dismal excistance 无人知晓这灰暗的存在I am longing for you, oh queen of my desire 可听清我心呼唤，向往的女王 Alone I cry so silent 为何留形影相吊，使悲泣无声Can you hear me 可听清我心呼唤Oh deliver me from my sorrow 请把我释放出痛苦的刑狱I feel so cold as I am drowning 这里如此阴冷，而又让人窒息In a sea of darkness am I fading away 夜色的海，随时会把我淹没其中

第一首，a forest of shadows里面And so I follow the path of unknown In solitude I wonder about 第二句里面可能是wander about,虽然在网上查找也只找到wonder about。前后句意思上可能是“我起身沿着,不知名的小径，只身四处闲逛”，这样全文的衔接会略显好些。

LZ能提供正确的试听地址？

VVPO上有,不过恐怕不容易听出来

http://www.vvpo.com/baidu/91966.Htm

Under The Dying Sun 残阳血色 In the fields of green在那广袤的绿野Her silhouette towards the sky侧影沉坠向苍穹Under the dying sun暮色里残阳如血I see her die竟以目光诀别In the fields of green 在那广袤的绿野An arrow of death死神竟射来箭矢 A dying beauty breathing枯萎的容颜轻叹Her last breath 那游丝的一息In the fields of green 在那广袤的绿野Under the dying sun 暮色里残阳如血 I cry out我失声哭泣 In grief for my beloved one只为痛失所爱A symbol of life and hope she was to me 我的希望啊，生命的印记 Now pain and suffering is all I can see只留下伤痛和折磨的，昼与夜An act of vengeance for the deeds I've done 难道究竟是惩罚我的罪行 Why must she pay with a life now gone 怎叫用她的年华来偿还I lay down beside her and gaze into the sky仰躺在她身旁，我凝视天空Eyes filled with tears why must she die 双眼盈泪，却怎唤她不回 In the fields of green 在那广袤的绿野Under the dying sun 暮色里残阳如血 I cry out我失声哭泣 In grief for my beloved one只为痛失所爱不好意思，耽误很久了，只是无聊无奈，希望不辜负等待。。。

Of Sorrow Blue带着哀伤忧郁Of sorrow blue and clad in mist 带着哀伤忧郁，穿着薄雾霓裳Dancing midst the meadows of my dreams 在我梦中的草地翩然起舞My precious one my fallen beauty 我的珍宝，坠落的美人Fallen beneath a dismal cloud 坠落那片阴沉的云彩 I recall that dreary morning 回想起那阴郁的早晨I ran to the shores of her eyes 我奔往那两抹秋水沿岸I was there watching the seas 凝神默对那海般深邃And it was all silent upon the sea 海面上也充满静寂A candle caravan 烛光的队列The final stream of angel gleam 由天使的辉光汇集There was no farewell of solace 究竟没有抚慰的道别Before the caravan was gone 那烛光径自不见Of sorrow blue and clad in tears 带着哀伤忧郁，泪水浸湿脸庞Her cordial hands reach for me 颤抖的芊手将我挽住My peaceful dream her soothing warmth 宁静的梦乡有她抚触的温暖Fallen beneath a dismal cloud 坠落那片阴沉的云彩 I bow to her beautiful name 问候她妙美的芳名The flowers need not to be watered 不必去浇灌那些花丛These tears wont let the soil dry 别去让这片土壤干枯 Where her name is carved in stone 只因她的名字已刻入磐石 You were my core you were my soul 你是我的魂灵，我的主宰 Lips of roses mane of gold 玫瑰的芳唇，金色的鬓丝 Intoxicated we lay entwined 醉意里我俩相拥缠绵 I wore the carnal crown of sorrow 哀伤时我加冕欲望的王冠Blue and clad in soil 忧郁且土壤已将我掩埋My mind still echoes from her songs我的灵魂仍旧萦绕她的歌谣 Earth and time are calling my name 现实的时空竟唤醒我过来Let me fall beneath this dismal cloud让我坠落这片阴沉的云彩

有个问题想问....In the fields of green 这句,有人告诉我这个GREEN应该是GREY

在中文网好像都是in the field of green:(下载听了几遍，中间也不是听得很清楚，到了最后差不多12:14的时候，更像是grey吧，呵呵那就in the field of grey, 在灰白的原野。这么辛苦，该谢谢我啊，呵呵

呵呵，这个封面图片应该更能说明问题。

头痛的事又来了under the dying sun，如果是血色的夕阳，整个色调就不对了，哎还是用“残阳欲灭”吧O)o~

谢谢，辛苦了