Everytime I Die Children of Bodom The faint blaze of the candle of my life,微弱的生命之火slowly dying like a fire in a pouring rain. 象细雨中的蜡烛忽明忽灭No sparks of hope inside, 不存在任何希望no shooting stars on my sky.我的天空仅有漆黑On broken wings, no flying high.折断了双翅,再也不能飞翔... Another night, another demise, 又一个夜晚,又一次崩溃Cadaverous wind blowing cold as ice. 凄冷的风刮过,有如冰刀I`ll let the wind blow out the light, 也许这次我应该让这光芒在风中熄灭Cause it gets more painful everytime I die. 因为每次打击都象在将伤口狠狠撕裂 Out of strength to fight, 再也没有力气挣扎I cannot take another night. 我撑不过这夜晚I cannot take it no more, 我已经到了极限Lust of light slips through my fingers. 生存的欲望从指缝中流逝Like blood on my arms, 双臂上残留的血迹Black candle wax has buried me. 象恶魔的烛蜡般煎熬着我 Another night, another demise, 又一个夜晚,又一次崩溃Cadaverous wind blowing cold as ice. 凄冷的风刮过,有如冰刀I`ll let the wind blow out the light, 也许这次我应该让这光芒在风中熄灭Cause it gets more painful everytime I die. 因为每次打击都象在将伤口狠狠撕裂

之前乐队排这首歌的时候翻译了一下，呵呵，挺久了，今天来到这个吧，顺便发出来，大家多给意见啊～thx

Cadaverous wind blowing cold as ice. 凄冷的风刮过,有如冰刀（凄冷风过,有如冰刀）首先，这一句要赞！足以传神。整体的也很有表现力。要注意的小地方有两个：）slowly dying like a fire in a pouring rain. 象细雨中的蜡烛忽明忽灭（翻译这句的确要很见功力，首先 merlinsong要强调前后整体的协调和视觉上的感觉，但是什么是pouring rain？显然不是细鱼，瓢泼大雨）Like blood on my arms, 双臂上残留的血迹 Black candle wax has buried me. 象恶魔的烛蜡般煎熬着我（比喻的本体和喻体错位，没办法，这就是形式的拘束，呵呵）

呵呵，果然是一针见血，这些问题我当时都想到过，但是后来还是按现在的样子办了，谢谢你给我的这些意见～～