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纯洁小兰陵
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the most lonesome holiday I've ever had.
at the time of my writing this composition ,as we all know ,the seven-day long vacation will be over soon.Now I have to say, never have I spent all the seven-day long vacation in school,even more important,it is the most lonesome holiday I've ever had.I ever think this holiday should be very colourful and make me happy before vacation.Such as traveling ,seeing the sea and so on.On the contrary we can't predict all things happened in the world.My dear friend got injured suddenly. As a result , we had to cancel the original plan, we can do nothing but go to the hospital for looking after the our injured friend.Eating ,sleeping,is my all life in this holiday.
Now,I have to say ,but for the hurt ,we would have a quite colurful holiday.However,there is no if.
2010年10月11日 06点10分
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at the time of my writing this composition ,as we all know ,the seven-day long vacation will be over soon.Now I have to say, never have I spent all the seven-day long vacation in school,even more important,it is the most lonesome holiday I've ever had.I ever think this holiday should be very colourful and make me happy before vacation.Such as traveling ,seeing the sea and so on.On the contrary we can't predict all things happened in the world.My dear friend got injured suddenly. As a result , we had to cancel the original plan, we can do nothing but go to the hospital for looking after the our injured friend.Eating ,sleeping,is my all life in this holiday.
Now,I have to say ,but for the hurt ,we would have a quite colurful holiday.However,there is no if.