自己听写修改版<漂浮地铁>英文版歌词~~ - 李宇春吧

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额..听写修改小漂的英文版歌词<Half a world away>的原因起初是自私的..因为上课要求唱英文歌...所以查了查小漂的英文歌词...发现了很多的问题....但也一直没找到官方版的...所以只好用对付托福的方法..对付了小漂...哈哈.. [抖胸]

听了2个小时..一点一点的听..终于过了自己这关...起码是说的通的...
但是...我觉得肯定还是有错误的....所以还要大家多多指正了.... [Love]

而且有两处我不太确定的..都贴出来让大家看看了...
还有有关中文的翻译...我觉得我的翻译实在是有点儿恶心...我能明白意思...但是不知道怎么表达... [汗]

好纠结的...所以只能给油菜的米米们提供一下中文翻译的建议...然后坐等牛人来翻中文了~~~
以下为歌词:
I watch you while you're sleeping next to me
It's hard to tell you who I need to be (我觉得大意是我不知道我变成什么样子才能讨你欢心了)
We stand together but we fall apart
I wonder where I end and where you start
I used to be the one you turned to(这句唱的时候when是在turned to后面的...但实际歌词写出来应该是和下句在一起的....)
when you needed someone strong or just a friend (strong有可以依靠..可以做决定的意思..可能歌词的意思是你需要有人依靠或者只是普通朋友)
What happend to the common that we named?
It frozen in silent years and lost explain
We're half a world away(我觉得不该直译成我们有半个地球的距离...应该是我们心的距离越来越远的意思吧...半个世界只是一个比喻吧....)
Locked outside the people that we used to be
Come back to me(这句话的主语应该是原来的我们...应该翻译成大概..被我们抛弃(锁在门外)的原来的我们快回到我身边)
We're half a world away
Still pretending that there's nothing wrong
just talk to me
And make my half world whole
if only you could stole mobile to me(我不太确定...但是听的确实是这样的..有点儿奇怪...但也好像讲的通..男生偷了女生的手机..所以下句是男生因此在周六进了局子...哈哈...)
I might not make you lose your Saturday
Still crazy like before who won your smile(这句主语应该是"我"..我还是那像过去赢得你微笑的那个人那么疯狂...)
wasn't i am the best just for a while
We're half a world away
Locked outside the people that we used to be
Come back to me
We're half a world away
Still pretending that there's nothing wrong just talk to me
And make my half world whole
I turn left , as you turn right
Between the start now the stranger can made mistakes(这句也是原版歌词错的最离谱的一句...我仔细的听写了..应该是对的..)
Don't give up, when we fight(这句主语应该是"你"..当我们吵架的时候..你不再妥协了...)
While all we always(像我们原来那样...)
half a world away
Locked outside the people that we used to be
Come back to me
We're half a world away
Still pretending that there's nothing wrong
Just talk to me
And make my half world whole
Locked outside the people that we used to be
Come back to me
We're half a world away
Let's pretending from now we are who we used to be (从现在开始...我们要假装我们还是原来的我们....)
And make my half world whole(大意是..将我们之间的空白填满......)
我觉得歌词大意应该是...女生发觉俩人的关系变了...半个地球只是比喻...所以不用刻意去纠结半个地球...翻译的诗意一点儿最好了~~
额额...结束了...大家意见多多的提啊... [Yeah]