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安向兔兔 楼主
此楼给作者!
这篇文太美了!试着翻了下。。意境不及10%。。直接搬原文。
贴了原文出处。。是不是就可以了。。= =
2010年06月12日 14点06分 1
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安向兔兔 楼主
First Snow, The   (= =此贴标题贴少了单词。。无视我吧)
Author: Sirielle
Rating: General  
Era: 1st Age   
Genre: General  
Completion: Complete
summary:
Winter morning in Himring, the siege of Angband time. Short look at the world with bright grey eyes...
原文出处:http://www.henneth-annun.net/stories/chapter.cfm?stid=4890

2010年06月12日 15点06分 2
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He reached the top of the tower. Brisk, frosty air surrounded him. The landscape down the hill was covered with mist.
Winter morning in Himring.
And the first snow.
The floor was already well sprinkled with delicate snowflakes.
He wrapped his thick long shawl tighter around his shoulders and slowly put a bare foot on the snow. At first he felt nothing as his skin was still warmed with the bath. He followed with his other foot, nothing. A step forward. Still nothing. Silence. Calm.
Slowly, he walked to the middle of the turret. Now he was starting to feel the chill and dampness under his feet, but still it was not unpleasant.
Snowflakes were lazily drifting before his eyes. He wanted to reach out, to catch them, to hold them in his hand, but... He had only one hand. The attempts to hold his shawl with the stump nearly ended with the garment falling. All he could do was to reach out with the stump or...
Turn his face towards the snow, as if towards the Sun.
He closed his eyes. The first snowflakes talked to him gently about calm and then, falling gently, whispered about change. He started to daydream... If only he could stop time, catch this frozen drop of water so it would remain beautiful for ever...
Father, what jewel would you forge if you could capture a snowflake before it reached my face?
How would you save the white frost gracing the world at dawn? Preserve a pattern embroidered with ice?
Have you ever seen snow falling from the sky?
Any snow at all except that on the peak of Taniquetil?
Even in Araman there was none...

2010年06月12日 15点06分 3
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安向兔兔 楼主
Without them it would be sad.
In answer there came a frosty blow from the north, swirling the falling snowflakes and sprinkling them into his eyes.
He went back following his traces. The snowy cover was almost intact, except for a few footprints of bare feet. In a while they would disappear.
He smiled to himself and went inside
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I would like to thank Mot and Nellelórë for their great help with the English translation and Tehta for the final beta-reading of the English text. Hantalë!

2010年06月12日 15点06分 5
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安向兔兔 楼主
Notes:
Reference to The Glitter of metal by Ithilwen.
Meaning of the Quenya names [Sindarin name & Quenya names with nicknames (epessë)]:
Maedhros: Maitimo - 'well-shaped one' - a reference to his beautiful bodily form, mother name; Russandol - 'copper-top' - an epessë given in reference to his red-brown hair; Maedhros (Sindarin) - 'Glitter of Metal', later changed into 'Well-formed (or shapely) Copper'.
Maglor: Kanafinwë - 'strong-voiced or commanding', father name; Makalaurë - ' forging gold' - a poetic reference to his skill in harping, mother name.
Amrod and Amras: Ambarussa - 'top-russet' - their mother name.
Source - J. R. R. Tolkien The Shibboleth of Fëanor in The History of Middle Earth volume XII.
filit - 'small bird' (Quenya). An affectionate nickname Maedhros has given to his brother Maglor. Epessë invited by Ithilwen.
Even in Araman there was none... Perhaps there was snow in Araman or in Losgar. For sure there was snow laying at the peak of Taniquetil in Aman. But was it falling down at the moment Fëanor was there? In my story - not ;)
hantalë - 'thank you' (Quenya)
Szczecin, XII 2004

2010年06月12日 15点06分 6
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安向兔兔 楼主
最后的弃权说明就不贴了。。。
2010年06月12日 15点06分 7
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安向兔兔 楼主
还有。。这个网站也是个好地方~
比如http://www.henneth-annun.net/resources/bios_view.cfm?scid=96
梳理得很清啊。。(喂这个只有你很模糊吧)
再比如有事件时间内容检索。。等。。(具体等什么我还在继续翻= =)
2010年06月12日 15点06分 8
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……安兔,其实他那个标题不是不全,而是分类所需……其实就是The First Snow,但因为The是冠词,很多文章都有,所以都把The放到后面 以便按照实意词分类。
文章的描写很漂亮……我超级喜欢下雪的
2010年06月12日 15点06分 9
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安向兔兔 楼主
自pia..我一直以为放后面是“这...”的意思。。。[拍砖]
2010年06月12日 15点06分 10
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安向兔兔 楼主
[旋转]现在了解啦~多谢riado指教~
2010年06月12日 15点06分 11
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啊啊啊好想翻……但是又担心翻不出来反而毁文TAT…………
2010年06月14日 03点06分 12
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秋儿现在翻译上瘾了?
2010年06月14日 04点06分 13
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