level 5
老师让我们写自己敬佩(admire)徳人、我准备写allen 。但英语水平有限 、囧..><会写徳亲帮我写个范文儿 、90词左右 、 初二徳呃 、谢谢鸟 、
2008年12月23日 12点12分
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level 4
I admire the most are a star. He handsome, good character. I admire very much. He is the singer name ALLEN. I most admired by the star. Do not just sing, he sounds good, and cool people, treat people friendly, excellent learning , A strong optimism. His music is very pleasant to the ear, his favorite HIP-HOP. In addition to singing, he is also good at dancing. SUPERBOY program and was runner-up. I hope that can become like him. I want him forever Learn!你自己数数吧...
2008年12月23日 13点12分
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level 4
或者你再把你要打的告诉我 我赶紧给你翻译下我自己写的哦... 你可以用的...应该没有90
2008年12月23日 13点12分
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level 4
恩...你还想加什么 我再帮你翻译吧..我觉得不够90字
2008年12月23日 13点12分
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level 4
Allen Su's life has always been a bit different from his peers. He 8.5 in the IELTS and then spent seven years in Australia. But since he entered the Super Boys show earlier lars year, his life has dramatically. Allen was born in a well-off family in Xi'an, Shanxi Province.He was a student when he was at school and always got good marks."My marks are getting lower and lower I am getting older and older,"Allen in an interview. Around a year ago, Allen came from Sydney and entered Super Boys,he finished second. Even though he did not come first,he won the of thousands of fans with his sunny appearance, life experience and humorous, Engish. Allen always tries to do everything as well as he can.Super Boys, he has improved his skills and become a more and better singer. Not only is he a good singer, Allen is now a host. He was the host of the Soccer Prince on Hunan Satellite TV in August. Recently Allen in a stage play called A Midsummer Night's Dream, which was written by William Shakespeare.is new to Allen. But he is hard-working and modest enough to learn to do it. His new play appeared stafe in Beijing on November. 2. It is believed that Allen will have great in the future, because he is a diligent and thoughuful person, just as he wrote in his which you can see on the Interner,"We smile, we cry, because we have in our life."我这里有一篇、不懂行不 不过超字数了 自己删掉一些吧
2008年12月23日 13点12分
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level 9
我是爪 要不我可以帮帮看>< 内啥 V同学那段有点点语法小错误
2008年12月23日 13点12分
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level 9
排IP 我也是爪 抱住。小蚊蚊加油啊V同学,我没别的意思哈 你也加油 我也加油 哈
2008年12月23日 13点12分
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level 4
呃..加油...我寒....今天第一次在这吧露面...
2008年12月23日 13点12分
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level 0
呵呵,小V真热心,赞一个!悦悦抱抱,我是茶楼的从从..闪走看珠光宝气了..小蚊加油哦!
2008年12月23日 13点12分
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level 9
从从啊 抱抱。老听觉觉提起你哈Congratulations to allen!!!!!
2008年12月23日 14点12分
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