Overseas studying In recent years,overseas studying is very popular.More and more people go abroad to study for various reasons. Why so many people like overseas studying?Becasuse there are better environment and advanced knowledge overseas.For this phenomenon ,different people have different opinions.Many people insist that go abroad to study can make them study more advanced knowledge and improve their practical ability.On the other hand,some people consider that the knowledge in our country is advanced enough. In my opinion,overseas studying is beneficial.Because studying abroad will make students get great improvement in their subjects.And it not noly improve their knowledge ,but also their practical ability.Besides,students can tough different customs.But,if you don't have enough money for overseas studying ,it'doesn't matter.Because the most important factor in yourself.

15分制，能得多少分？有什么不足？谢谢大家了

8，9分吧语法错误不多，但句式少些变化，有些表达不是地道的英文表达，有中文语义堆砌的痕迹。