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phoebe_afye
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when asked about reading,some people hold the opinion that it can help us aquire more knowledge while it seems a waste of time to others。as for me,reading benefits us badly。 here i would explain a few of significant reasons for my choice (opinion)as follows。to start with,reading books after school should be hightlighted since what we learn from schools is limited。whats more,books teach people to face difficulties and setbacks。the opponents of reading books after school are not wrong in focousing on school study,but they must not do so at the expense of losing a kind of enormous mental effort and opportunites to improve ones social and moral consciousness。anyway,i like reading and i do benifit from it,widening my horizon,bringing happiness and wisdom。eddy(新东方):论证部分显得不够精致和具体 最好有具体的事例加以论证:)以后有兴趣的朋友可以偶尔到偶的BLOG上面去看看,会有修改和更多的评语以及更多的文章
2007年08月27日 05点08分
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