HaiNan is a beautiful city .There are a lot of coconut trees .so people can eat verdure coconut every day . I like eating coconut so i hope i can go to hainan for holiday. Go there is a good idea ! Let’s search for our good city in heart to have a rest .

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HaiNan is a beautiful city filled with coconut trees.There for, the lacal people as well as the vistors could have verdure cocnut at any time no matter any where. I love coconuts and really hope I could go there for holiday. Lying on the sunshine beach and having my favourt- coconut. Isn't it a great idea? Summer holiday is coming and I really wish that all of us could think about a city we love and go to for a good rest.

Hainan, the tropical city, is not only for the beautiful cityscape, yet there is abudant coconuts. And you can see many coconut trees by the roadside definitely. I hope I will go there this holiday and drink the coconut juice, which is my favourite, if I have a chance. As both there and here are hot, why not to enjoy the coconut juice, sea breeze and the sunshine? I suppose this must be a intelligent decision.

verdure is noun. and it isn't mean "fresh", for it decribes the evergreen or other green foliage usually. The correct explanation should be "the lush appearance of flourishing vegetation".Go there can't be used as subject, amend it to "To go there".The last sentence perhaps is wrong, I consider.These my opinions merely for refering.

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