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(Topic sentence)Every family has rules. Now I‘ll tell you about my rules at home. (Rule1)I can’t go out on school nights, 2 and I’m not allowed to play computer games even after I have finish my homework. 3 But the most terrible rule I have is that I have to go to bed before 9 o’clock. (comment)I used to finish my homework at school when I was a pupil, but now I am a middle school student, and usually have more homework to do. So I can’t finish it by 10 o’clock. (suggestion)I think I should be allowed to go to bed later, let’s say, by 11 o’clock.(Topic)There are a lot of rules in our school. (Rule1)For example, we can’t eat in classrooms, 2and we are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school, and so on, I think most of them are good for us, but some are not, 3one of the rules I have most is that we have to wear school uniforms at school. (Comment)I think we should be allowed to wear our own clothes. It makes us feel happier. (Suggestion)If we can’t wear our own clothes at school, we should be allowed to design our school uniforms. It will make both teachers and students happy. There are many rules in our school. Let me tell you about them with my own idea. First, we have to wear school uniforms every day. Then we can’t eat in classrooms. And we’re not allowed to bring mobile phones to school, either. About the third one, I’ve some different ideas. Although we don’t need mobile phones at school, Some of the students’ home are far away from school. They must let their parents know where they are after school. I think we should be allowed to bring it, but we can’t make any noise with it in class.I really hope that our school will agree with me. That’s good for both students and parents.
2006年11月13日 12点11分 1
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