Michael 我写了一篇作文（学校出的） 帮忙批改一下 谢谢写一篇短文1、如何处理城市垃圾是一个重要的问题，因为垃圾污染了环境而且还对人的身体有害；2、寻求一些处理垃圾的方法：将垃圾分类；报纸和玻璃制品再利用；罐头可以制成美丽的手工制品；3、污水净化处理；4、我国政府已经制定了保护环境的相关法律；5、我们只有一个地球，我们必须尽力保护它 。Saving Our EarthNow, it is environmental pollution that is more and more serious. It is a significantproblem how to deal with the rubbish.Due to the rubbish taint the environment. What worried us was that rubbish is bad to our health. As a concequence, we week some excellent ways to deal with the rubbish. First and foremost, we sout the subbish. Moreover, papers and glass can be reused again,dirty water can be dealt with. Last but not least, bottles can be made beautiful artefacts. If we doesn't this, we should suffer form the more serious problem. Our government, as all may know, has made a lot of laws of environment. No one can deny that we have only one earth. We being living on the earth, protect the environment is fairly meaningful. 

Saving Our Earth Now, it is environmental pollution that is more and more serious. It is a significant problem how to deal with the rubbish.Due to(后面要加名词性的东西,还应该有个主句) the rubbish taint the environment. What worried us was that rubbish is bad to our health. As a concequence, we week(?) some excellent ways to deal with the rubbish. First and foremost, we sout the subbish(?). Moreover, papers and glass can be reused again,dirty water can be dealt with. Last but not least, bottles can be made beautiful artefacts. If we doesn't(他是助动词) do this, we should suffer form the more serious problem. Our government, as all may know, has made a lot of laws of environment. No one can deny that we have only one earth. We ,living on the earth, protect the environment is fairly meaningful. (最后一句话有两个动词)还是有基础错误,总体有进步,还要细些.19分左右.

Michael 谢谢

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