06福建Dear friends,As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.Despite the healthy eating habits are fairly important, some students have such unhealthy eating habits as having not breakfast, loving snack, being particular about food, and eating more food.Healthy eating habits include not only eating a variety of food but also eating food in a fixed time and a fixed quantity.In my own opinion, having healthy eating habits being a matter of great significance can help us to build our bodies. If we hadn’t healthy eating habits, we shouldn’t have enough energy to study and work.That’s all. Thank you.

教师节还要老师改作文，老师，辛苦了！问一下，we are what we eat.什么意思？

“having not breakfast”是不是写得不太好我觉得应该改成having no breakfast或者without having breakfast,奇哥觉得呢？我说得对吗？不对请一并指出，谢谢

If we hadn’t healthy eating habits这半句话中hadn't是什么词呢？是助动词？那么你没写谓语动词；是谓语动词？那你就不能直接那样否定

Dear friends, As we all know, we are what we eat.(是饮食影响健康的意思) Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. Despite the fact that the healthy eating habits are fairly important, some students have such unhealthy eating habits as not having breakfast(3楼说的也没有错), loving snack, being particular about food, and eating too much food. Healthy eating habits include not only eating a variety of food but also eating food in a fixed time and a fixed quantity. In my own opinion, having healthy eating habits being a matter of great significance can help us to build our bodies. If we hadn’t had(4楼说的对) healthy eating habits, we shouldn’t have enough energy to study and work. That’s all. Thank you.

谢谢老师。楼上的姐妹，也谢谢你了。