04TJDear friends, By no means will I forget the fairly unforgettable discussion among our class last week. How to deal with our pocket money gived by our parents become a popular topic. Some students hold the view that we had better put it into banks in order to keep the habit of saving money. Some believes that if we don’t buy some available books with it,on no account will we gain much more knowledge . Despite the fact that at our age , we should concentrate on our study ,which is the most important, others hopes to use it in our interest including music, physical education, collecting stamps and so on. In a word, we had better use it in an useful way which can be good for our further future. 

Dear friends, By no means will I forget the fairly unforgettable discussion among our class last week. How to deal with our pocket money given(过去分词都错!) by our parents has become a popular topic. Some students hold the view that we had better put it into banks in order to keep the habit of saving money. Some believes that if we don’t buy some useful books with it,on no account will we gain much more knowledge . Despite the fact that at our age , we should concentrate on our study ,which is the most significant, others hopes to use it in our interests including music, physical education, collecting stamps and so on. In a word, we had better use it in an useful way which can be beneficial for our further future. 我改动了几处，自己仔细对照一下，总体来说不错，就是不仔细．