不休恶搞了一首，还没写完大家忙忙一起想想，这是原词
James Blunt - You're Beautiful
My life is brilliant
My life is brilliant
My love is pure
I saw an angel
Of that I'm sure
She smiled at me on the subway
She was with another man
But I won't lose no sleep on that
'Cause I've got a plan
You're beautiful You're beautiful
You're beautiful it's true
I saw your face in a crowded place
And I don't know what to do
'Cause I'll never be with you
Yeah she caught my eye
As we walked on by
She could see from my face that I was
****ing high
And I don't think that I'll see her again
But we shared a moment that will last till the end
You're beautiful You're beautiful
You're beautiful it's true
I saw your face in a crowded place
And I don't know what to do
'Cause I'll never be with you
You're beautiful You're beautiful
You're beautiful it's true
There must be an angel with a smile on her face
When she thought up that I should be with you
But it's time to face the truth
I will never be with you


My life is brilliant
My life is brilliant
My love is pure
I saw an （没想好）
Of that I'm sure
he smiled at me on the television
he was with another man
（But I won't lose no sleep on that
'Cause I've got a plan)可能会改
He is wonderful，He is wonderful
He is wonderful，It's ture
I saw his face in a shining place
（                  ）
（            ）
Yaeh he caught my eye
As the game over
I could see from his face that he has
won the game
And I shell believe that I'll see he again
At that time a cup was lift by his hand
He is wonderful，He is wonderful
He is wonderful，It's ture
I saw his face in a shining place
(                         )
(                       )
He is wonderful，He is wonderful
He is wonderful，It's ture
But then another man with smile on his face
(                        )
It's time face that ture
I'll always stand with he
                
           


一直在纠结到底是用第二人称好还是第三人称
会选用James的You are beautiful是因为不知在哪里看见咕咚说他喜欢James，而这首歌大多数英国人都听过，空白的地方我想了很久了，哎，这就是不好好学英语的后果，晚上继续想，大家也要帮忙哦！
对了，这些的是07上海大师赛的事，不休会好好编，可以的话，S也要收进画册哦！

好主意，不休，加油！不过这歌小忆还没听过，先下载下来听听，找找感觉，然后看能不能帮不休想想歌词
小忆觉得第二人称更好，直接和咕咚对话的感觉，小忆经常在码字的时候本来写的是第三人称结果每次写到心理活动就不知不觉地变成第二人称了

千万里，我追寻着你
像一阵细雨洒落我心底
长路奉献给远方
玫瑰奉献给爱情
我拿什么奉献给你
我的爱人
白云奉献给草场
江河奉献给海洋
我拿什么奉献给你
我的朋友

好长-。-

不休太强了，小忆树大拇指ing
不过帖子里有一句话的位置好像有点问题

哈哈西子也有这个想法，
不过我觉得自己作曲更加好有才的速速献身了啊~~~~~~~无才填个词什么的也好~~~~~~
咱们自己演唱更加好

这歌太适合咕咚了
尤其是声音适合
他自己说不定会唱

I saw 什么呢，我还是没想出来

我为什么会想到i saw an eagle||||||||||||||||||||||

额~~

我想听咕咚亲自唱这歌……的原版……和……翻版

回复：14楼
他会一边唱一边笑的吧 哈哈哈

用绅士好不好？

i saw a gentleman？

突然彤彤的那张哈姆雷特从我的脑海里闪过

话说 这首要往上放么？怎么放？

S啊，这个你可能要看着办了，不休说她直到十一之前都不来了……

回复：20楼
我已经看到最后那个版本了
我帮她修改过语法放上去了