机构老师说每段第一句话必须要有连接词，给出论点。还要求背范文，但我觉得这很死板，像八股文一样，真的有必要这样吗？【附我写的作文，被贬得一文不值】

AI, referring to Artificial Intelligence, has become a familiar word in our life. As a new concept, no doubt that many people may argue about its pros and cons.
From my perspective, AI can bring more advantages than disadvantages. First and foremost, being highly automated is a vital feature of AI, which helps reduce the cost of employing human workers and prevent the blunders caused by employees. In addition, AI has no emotions and it can always make rational decisions. Unless the machine is overheated and requires cooling, AI needs no rest at all and it never complains. What's more, AI can solve multiple tasks simultaneously, which is impossible for human workers. The employers can take advantage of AI's efficiency to get more profits.
One of the most controversial points of AI is whether AI will replace humans. Some of the AI protesters are worried about the job losses because AI can finish their tasks with better efficiency and correctness, especially in finishing manual work and data processing. Furthermore, these protesters are concerned that the increase of the unemployment rate may finally cause some social problems and do harm to social stability.
However, in my humble opinion, these protesters are too negative about their future. We should have a clear mind that AI is not so powerful that it isn't qualified for all the jobs. Human workers are still essential in some posts. AI lacks humanity so human workers are still required to do some certain decisions that AI can hardly do, or it is likely to lead to prejudice and errors. For example, most of passengers prefer to take a manned taxi rather than a driverless taxi. They are worried whether AI is reliable enough to control a sophisticated car and what will the AI do when a driverless car encounters an inevitable accident. Although some jobs may be taken over by AI, more potential job opportunities may emerge in the near future. Additionally, not only can AI be applied to work, but also it

but also it can make our daily life much more convenient. As the Internet of things is also rapidly developing, the AI technology is likely to play an important role in that field. Every individual will benefit from the AI technology, so there is no need to regard AI as an enemy.
Generally speaking, despite some disadvantages, AI is still a useful tool for whole humanity. Developing AI technology is the trend of the world, so we should try to accept and embrace it positively.

AI has been a new hot topic recently and has promoted widespread debate in our life. What’s your opinion on how will AI affect our life, especially on whether humans will be replaced by AI? Please write an argumentative essay.

补充一下背景，因为我是工科跨考英语笔译，词汇量和句式纯属吃老本，可能有所欠缺，但我想知道能不能这样写，是不是必须要按这个机构老师所说格式写

在此谢谢各位指点

大部分人选择背是因为自己写的比套路文章还烂，你要能写的跟英语阅读那样当然很好。就我个人看法不太行，至少不是好文章。

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老师的说法还是靠谱，低端翻译依kao套路。中高端翻译都是海归，你不留学没法到那个层次。你在上海坐一次地铁，途中你会遇到几十个海归，海归不罕见，低端翻译不是很吃香。

英语没有逻辑词就看不懂啊。。

另外你的文章被吞了一半 能看到的后半段emmm。。。如果我不会中文应该不知道你想说什么

我超，又被吞了

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