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「编写一件事的毕业论文明确提出许多有关平行结构的建议。我想问一下什么叫英语句子的『平行结构』?」
回应:
平行结构就是指以「同样英语的语法展现好几个对等的定义」。这类创作的特点是会涉及语法、设计风格、修辞方法与内容。若应用得当,可提高阅读者和自身针对某一主题风格的了解与了解。
Do unto others as you would have others do unto you.(你要想他人如何看待你,便要先如何看待他人)
Some say the world will end in fire,some say in ice.(有些人说全球将结束于烈焰,有些人说结束于冰风)
下列是必须改动成平行结构的词组:
词组一
While it was raining,I had to run into the grocery store,the dry cleaners,and stop at the bookstore.
这一语句仍未选用平行结构,由于之中三个对等的定义里面,2个应用行为动词,一个却没有形容词。在中间的对等定义里边再加上「duck into」后,语句便可造成出平行结构:While it was raining,I had to run into the grocery store,duck into the dry cleaners,and stop at the bookstore.(下雨时候,我只能跑进杂货铺、躲到洗衣店、滞留在图书店。)
另一个改动方法是将原话中的「stop at」删除,获得:While it was raining,I had to run into the grocery store,the dry cleaners,and the bookstore.(下雨时候,我只能跑进杂货铺、洗衣店、图书店。)
词组二
The test was long and requiring skills we hadn't learned.
这一语句并没有选用平行结构,因为它是以不一样的英语的语法方式来展现2个对等定义。下列是改成平行结构的结果:
The test was long and required skills we hadn't learned.(这一考试必须花许多时间,并且必须一些还没有学得的技术性。)
针对成对定义或例举新项目来讲(如所述2个词组所显示),应用时尽量注意「是不是合乎平行结构的句行」。谨记汉字须能配搭全部的成双定义或例举新项目,这类汉字包括冠词(the、a、an)与代词(by、for、of、on、to)。
成对定义的平行面句构
在英语句子中应用成双的定义或新项目,一般会佐以较为句式,比如easier than、as much as、bigger than;对等连词,比如and、but、for、nor、or、so、yet;有关连词,比如both…and、either…or、just as…so、neither…nor、not…but、not only…but also、whether…or。看完下列错误的平行结构词组后,请将每一句改成恰当使用方法,每一句能够有一种之上的改法。
词组一
《比较句型》
Our neighbor's house is bigger than the size of our house.
参照改法:
Our neighbor's house is bigger than our house.(隔壁邻居比我家还大)
或者
The size of our neighbor's house is bigger than the size of our house.(隔壁邻居的尺寸比我家还大)
词组二
《对等连接词》
Shou-bi,my crazy dog loves running after Frisbees and plays with leaves.
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参照改法:
Shou-bi,my crazy dog,loves running after Frisbees and playing with leaves.(我的一个狂犬病狗「瘦比」喜爱追着飞盘跑和玩落叶)
或者
Shou-bi,my crazy dog,loves to run after Frisbees and to play with leaves.(我的一个狂犬病狗「瘦比」喜爱追着飞盘跑和玩落叶)
词组三
《相关连接词》
Not only was he rude,but also ate all the shrimp balls.
参照改法:
Not only was he rude,but also he ate all the shrimp balls.(他不只不礼貌,还吃完全部的虾球)
或者
Not only was he rude,but he also ate all the shrimp balls.(他不只不礼貌,还吃完全部的虾球)
例举新项目的平行面句构
例举新项目不但包括嵌入在语句里的定义,也包含序号式或点列式的例举新项目。若要查验创作「是不是合乎平行结构的句式」,在其中一中方法是:叫出第一个例举新项目以前的句干,随后对于这一句干逐一提升事后例举新项目。如此句干能够配搭第一个新项目,则务必还要能配搭事后新项目,才可以合乎平行结构的句式。
词组
After I get off work,I'm driving to the gym,running five miles,and weights.
找到第一个例举新项目以前的句干(After I get off work,I'm…)
确定句干能够配搭第一个新项目(After I get off work,I'm driving to the gym.)
确定句干能够配搭第二个新项目(After I get off work,I'm running five miles.)
句干没法配搭第三个新项目(After I get off work,weights.)
调整为平行面句构:After I get off work,I'm driving to the gym,running five miles,and lifting weights.(下班了,我想驾车去健身会所、跑个五英哩和练竞走)
确定句干能够配搭第三个新项目(After I get off work,I'm lifting weights.)
错误词组一
《镶嵌在句子里的概念》
On Saturday,my roommates and I are playing in a game of basketball,collecting coats for charity,work on our homework for three hours,and go to a party in the Village.
参照改法:
On Saturday,my roommates and I are going to play in a game of basketball,collect coats for charity,spend three hours on homework,and go to a party in the Village.(星期六我跟舍友准备去打蓝球、搜集外衣拿来捐助、做作业三小时和报名参加村内的狂欢派对)
或者
Essay writing service on http://www.hotessay.net.On Saturday,my roommates and I are playing in a game of basketball,collecting coats for charity,spending three hours on homework,and going to a party in the Village.(星期六我跟舍友准备去打蓝球、搜集外衣拿来捐助、做作业三小时和报名参加村内的狂欢派对)
错误词组二
《列举项目》
The people I have met since starting college include the following:
Mei-ing Chang
Joe Chen,a guy from the Taipei area
Adam Lu and Donna Liu
Ian Yang from Hong Kong
and Jason Li,whom I met in math class
参照改法:
The people I have met since starting college include the following:
Mei-ing Chang
Joe Chen
Adam Lu
Donna Liu
Ian Yang
Jason Li
或者
The people I have met since starting college include the following:
Mei-ing Chang from near Taichung
Joe Chen from the Taipei area
Adam Lu from Hsinchu
Donna Liu from Hsinchu
Ian Yang from Hong Kong
Jason Li from Morris,Indiana
运用平行结构
若将最重特大或出乎意料的新项目摆放在例举的最后一个选秀权,便可以吸引住阅读者的留意,也有利于衬托全部例举新项目。注意下列2个词组的不一样。
将最重特大的新项目摆放在最终:In the accident,he received cuts on his face,a mild concussion,a cracked rib,and a ruptured spleen.(那一场出现意外使他面部划伤、轻度脑震荡、肋巴骨开裂、脾脏破裂)
将最重特大的新项目摆放在正中间:In the accident,he received cuts on his face,a ruptured spleen,a cracked rib,and a mild concussion.(那一场出现意外使他面部划伤、脾脏破裂、肋巴骨开裂、轻度脑震荡)
应用同样或并排的字汇来配搭所较为的定义,能够提升较为的实际效果。
应用同样字汇的词组:It's unusual to feel intense attraction and intense repulsion for the same person.(对某一人另外怀里明显的爱恨之间不是太不同寻常的事儿)
应用并排字汇的词组:You always seem to run to guitar lessons and crawl to piano lessons.(你一直飞步跑去上吉他课,再举步走着上钢琴课)
应用平行结构的关键回望
1.平行结构的句式就是指「以同样英语的语法方式来展现好几个对等定义或例举新项目」。
2.平行结构是一种修辞方法或设计风格技巧,以适度性或合理的方法来排序欲注重的定义。
3.英语句子中的成双定义应当要选用平行结构的句式。
4.不论是嵌入在语句中的好几个定义,或者一条条例举出去的新项目,两者都应选用平行结构的句式。
5.在大部分状况下,将语句或例举新项目改成平行结构的方式不只一种。
2022年07月05日 03点07分
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「编写一件事的毕业论文明确提出许多有关平行结构的建议。我想问一下什么叫英语句子的『平行结构』?」
回应:
平行结构就是指以「同样英语的语法展现好几个对等的定义」。这类创作的特点是会涉及语法、设计风格、修辞方法与内容。若应用得当,可提高阅读者和自身针对某一主题风格的了解与了解。
Do unto others as you would have others do unto you.(你要想他人如何看待你,便要先如何看待他人)
Some say the world will end in fire,some say in ice.(有些人说全球将结束于烈焰,有些人说结束于冰风)
下列是必须改动成平行结构的词组:
词组一
While it was raining,I had to run into the grocery store,the dry cleaners,and stop at the bookstore.
这一语句仍未选用平行结构,由于之中三个对等的定义里面,2个应用行为动词,一个却没有形容词。在中间的对等定义里边再加上「duck into」后,语句便可造成出平行结构:While it was raining,I had to run into the grocery store,duck into the dry cleaners,and stop at the bookstore.(下雨时候,我只能跑进杂货铺、躲到洗衣店、滞留在图书店。)
另一个改动方法是将原话中的「stop at」删除,获得:While it was raining,I had to run into the grocery store,the dry cleaners,and the bookstore.(下雨时候,我只能跑进杂货铺、洗衣店、图书店。)
词组二
The test was long and requiring skills we hadn't learned.
这一语句并没有选用平行结构,因为它是以不一样的英语的语法方式来展现2个对等定义。下列是改成平行结构的结果:
The test was long and required skills we hadn't learned.(这一考试必须花许多时间,并且必须一些还没有学得的技术性。)
针对成对定义或例举新项目来讲(如所述2个词组所显示),应用时尽量注意「是不是合乎平行结构的句行」。谨记汉字须能配搭全部的成双定义或例举新项目,这类汉字包括冠词(the、a、an)与代词(by、for、of、on、to)。
成对定义的平行面句构
在英语句子中应用成双的定义或新项目,一般会佐以较为句式,比如easier than、as much as、bigger than;对等连词,比如and、but、for、nor、or、so、yet;有关连词,比如both…and、either…or、just as…so、neither…nor、not…but、not only…but also、whether…or。看完下列错误的平行结构词组后,请将每一句改成恰当使用方法,每一句能够有一种之上的改法。
词组一
《比较句型》
Our neighbor's house is bigger than the size of our house.
参照改法:
Our neighbor's house is bigger than our house.(隔壁邻居比我家还大)
或者
The size of our neighbor's house is bigger than the size of our house.(隔壁邻居的尺寸比我家还大)
词组二
《对等连接词》
Shou-bi,my crazy dog loves running after Frisbees and plays with leaves.
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参照改法:
Shou-bi,my crazy dog,loves running after Frisbees and playing with leaves.(我的一个狂犬病狗「瘦比」喜爱追着飞盘跑和玩落叶)
或者
Shou-bi,my crazy dog,loves to run after Frisbees and to play with leaves.(我的一个狂犬病狗「瘦比」喜爱追着飞盘跑和玩落叶)
词组三
《相关连接词》
Not only was he rude,but also ate all the shrimp balls.
参照改法:
Not only was he rude,but also he ate all the shrimp balls.(他不只不礼貌,还吃完全部的虾球)
或者
Not only was he rude,but he also ate all the shrimp balls.(他不只不礼貌,还吃完全部的虾球)
例举新项目的平行面句构
例举新项目不但包括嵌入在语句里的定义,也包含序号式或点列式的例举新项目。若要查验创作「是不是合乎平行结构的句式」,在其中一中方法是:叫出第一个例举新项目以前的句干,随后对于这一句干逐一提升事后例举新项目。如此句干能够配搭第一个新项目,则务必还要能配搭事后新项目,才可以合乎平行结构的句式。
词组
After I get off work,I'm driving to the gym,running five miles,and weights.
找到第一个例举新项目以前的句干(After I get off work,I'm…)
确定句干能够配搭第一个新项目(After I get off work,I'm driving to the gym.)
确定句干能够配搭第二个新项目(After I get off work,I'm running five miles.)
句干没法配搭第三个新项目(After I get off work,weights.)
调整为平行面句构:After I get off work,I'm driving to the gym,running five miles,and lifting weights.(下班了,我想驾车去健身会所、跑个五英哩和练竞走)
确定句干能够配搭第三个新项目(After I get off work,I'm lifting weights.)
错误词组一
《镶嵌在句子里的概念》
On Saturday,my roommates and I are playing in a game of basketball,collecting coats for charity,work on our homework for three hours,and go to a party in the Village.
参照改法:
On Saturday,my roommates and I are going to play in a game of basketball,collect coats for charity,spend three hours on homework,and go to a party in the Village.(星期六我跟舍友准备去打蓝球、搜集外衣拿来捐助、做作业三小时和报名参加村内的狂欢派对)
或者
Essay writing service on http://www.hotessay.net.On Saturday,my roommates and I are playing in a game of basketball,collecting coats for charity,spending three hours on homework,and going to a party in the Village.(星期六我跟舍友准备去打蓝球、搜集外衣拿来捐助、做作业三小时和报名参加村内的狂欢派对)
错误词组二
《列举项目》
The people I have met since starting college include the following:
Mei-ing Chang
Joe Chen,a guy from the Taipei area
Adam Lu and Donna Liu
Ian Yang from Hong Kong
and Jason Li,whom I met in math class
参照改法:
The people I have met since starting college include the following:
Mei-ing Chang
Joe Chen
Adam Lu
Donna Liu
Ian Yang
Jason Li
或者
The people I have met since starting college include the following:
Mei-ing Chang from near Taichung
Joe Chen from the Taipei area
Adam Lu from Hsinchu
Donna Liu from Hsinchu
Ian Yang from Hong Kong
Jason Li from Morris,Indiana
运用平行结构
若将最重特大或出乎意料的新项目摆放在例举的最后一个选秀权,便可以吸引住阅读者的留意,也有利于衬托全部例举新项目。注意下列2个词组的不一样。
将最重特大的新项目摆放在最终:In the accident,he received cuts on his face,a mild concussion,a cracked rib,and a ruptured spleen.(那一场出现意外使他面部划伤、轻度脑震荡、肋巴骨开裂、脾脏破裂)
将最重特大的新项目摆放在正中间:In the accident,he received cuts on his face,a ruptured spleen,a cracked rib,and a mild concussion.(那一场出现意外使他面部划伤、脾脏破裂、肋巴骨开裂、轻度脑震荡)
应用同样或并排的字汇来配搭所较为的定义,能够提升较为的实际效果。
应用同样字汇的词组:It's unusual to feel intense attraction and intense repulsion for the same person.(对某一人另外怀里明显的爱恨之间不是太不同寻常的事儿)
应用并排字汇的词组:You always seem to run to guitar lessons and crawl to piano lessons.(你一直飞步跑去上吉他课,再举步走着上钢琴课)
应用平行结构的关键回望
1.平行结构的句式就是指「以同样英语的语法方式来展现好几个对等定义或例举新项目」。
2.平行结构是一种修辞方法或设计风格技巧,以适度性或合理的方法来排序欲注重的定义。
3.英语句子中的成双定义应当要选用平行结构的句式。
4.不论是嵌入在语句中的好几个定义,或者一条条例举出去的新项目,两者都应选用平行结构的句式。
5.在大部分状况下,将语句或例举新项目改成平行结构的方式不只一种。