I am always waitingTo the future in my own promisingCan't think of the seperationWhen it passes the stationEnd my endless dreamIt's so sweetIt's too sweetBut even so It's not the realityAll of what I can do The whole thing I am doingBefore the storm comesCould I find a handInstead my white umbrellaTo walk inside the rain with my lonlyWhat I believe foreverWhat I hold in my heart before sleepIt's my factYou will come backI'm still waiting...仅以此诗，献给兰，希望她的等待可以早日有个圆满的结局大概有许多语法错误，望大家多多包涵。

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........楼主，（也许偶对英文诗一窍不通）你的错误太多了吧？

偶完全看不懂~~~~

不压韵

呜呼，下次还是改写中文的了押韵我确实做不到……我是中国人的说，而且平常也很少写押韵的诗，一般都是散文诗，没那个要求，至于语法错误，我觉得用对的语法只能写出作文写不出诗，谁给指教一下

楼主还是写中文吧，英文歌，诗太难了。有很多的省略，习语，很复杂的说，弄的不好会让人一头雾水的！

可惜我的中文还是更执著于美战……不过试一试也无妨