2006 江苏
据报道，2008年北京奥运会将选拔约10万名志愿者为之服务。请你以Dos and Don’ts for the2008 Olympic Volunteers题，用英语写一篇短文，短文应包括下表中的内容
Dos 待人礼貌有好；坚守岗位；介绍中国历史和文化
Don’ts避免不得体的言行；不忘履行自己的职责；不损害祖国的形象
如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应该做什么
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Dos and Don’ts for the2008 Olympic Volunteers
It is reported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing. What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?
     Of course, not only should volunteers be polite and friendly to people ,but also stay at themselves position without going away. It is widely accepted that the culture and history of China is attractive, so volunteers should introduce them to the visitors.
Besides, volunteers should avoid some words and acts that Is not gently. Foremore, never should they forget their responsibility. In addition, they mustn’t do anything that is harmful to the image of our country.
If I have the honor to be chosen as a volunteer, I would do not only above but also try my best in volunteering, and help make the Olympic Games success.
这篇作文麻烦给看看啦


but also stay at (themselves position )without going away. 应该是 position of themselves
It is widely accepted that the culture and history of China （is ）attractive.
Besides, volunteers should avoid some words and acts that （Is） not gently. 这两个句子中的 is 都应该是 are
（Foremore）, never should they forget their responsibility.“Foremore”是笔误？应该是Furthermore啊！
这道作文题是2006年的，你要是作为当年的考生去写的话，结尾的虚拟语气就应该是与将来时相反，所以结尾那句话的时态有点小问题。改成:
If I were to have the honor to be chosen as a volunteer, I would do not only above but also try my best in volunteering, and help make the Olympic Games success.
这篇文章从总体来说，我感觉写的还不错。我觉得18分。因为出现了is are 单复数的必扣分的错误，所以不能上20了。你自己再看看吧。


不知今年作文会考什么题目
捏

坚守岗位应该是stick to their posts
整体感觉还好，没有太大的语法错误
但是如果不用那么多should可能会更好，还有，一篇文章中尽量不要用两处相同的高级语法，你这篇貌似用了两个倒装哈
结尾人家让写该做什么，不该做什么，你只写了该做的，而且该做的事也没说具体，少内容要点了啊


回复：3楼
今年考什么题目，这个谁都说不准啊。不过今年世博会、夏季达沃斯都是时政热点。考一个有关世博志愿者的话题，也很有可能啊，哈哈。但保险起见，还是按文章类型练好各类文章，到时不管什么话题，你就都能应对了。

谢谢啊

About100,000people,reportedly,will be volunteers for the 2008 olympic games.What the Dos and Don’ts for the Volunteers?
sure,politeness is the first law.And sticking to the posts is of significance.while doing these,the volunteers are supposed to be a bridge between west and east,to spread our chinese culture and explain our history.
besides,volunteers should avoid improper words or actions and doing anything will diminish esteem for our country.

谢谢哈

7楼,胡写的,帮忙改改

besides,volunteers should avoid improper words or actions and doing anything (that)will diminish esteem for our country. 加个that

谢谢

2009天津卷
I’m Li Hua who organized the competition. The competition is hold once a year and today is the beginning for this year. We aims to improving the ability in speaking and listening of contests in English and help them owning the habit of reading books by this competition, for which topic is “The English Novel I Like Best”.
   There are some rules to attention. Should no one speak more than 5 minutes. Besides, we would give good cores by speaking fluently and having the correctly pronunciation.
   At last, I hope everybody try their best and get a good score.


帮忙看看啦，谢谢！！！我是12楼

回复：12楼
We (aims) to (improving) the ability in speaking . 应该是aim to improve   ，aim注意主语是We，单复数啊！！
we would give good cores by (speaking fluently) and having the (correctly) pronunciation. 改一下：we would give good mark by your fluent speaking and having the correct pronunciation（注意是形容词修饰名词，副词修饰动词）
我觉得17分，整体还可以，要是没有以上这些细节的错误，分数会更高一些的。多注意细节，你自己再看看，好吧。


有劳各位了，谁还有那个背单词的表格啊，就是100个一组，28天全记住的那个，有的话麻烦发一个呗，谢谢了