《ChapterⅠ》
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Just like after a dream,I left Paranui and come to Motonui,where everything is by design.Tala,my daughter,now is the mother of the chief.
"Tala,it's you!"Though many years had passed,I still instantly recognized her–my gift from the angel.
To my relief,she recognized me as a return.It's hard to believe she looks old but seems strong and healthy.
"Since I've been at the age of stealing the thought of destiny,then it's no amazement seeing you,dad."Tala said so. But she still couldn't help hugging me,though she passed through me.
"I'm a ghost…"
"I know."Tala pretended to hold my hand,"Let me show you around."
"Motonui,our island."Tala said,"as you told me,'Moto' means safety."
"But you know,'Para' refers to adventure. We are voyagers."My heart suddenly fell into an ice hole,guessing that some factors had changed something. The factors may be the comfortable environment contrasted with the dangerous voyaging life far of the sea.
"We were voyagers."Tala sighed.
2020年10月31日 13点10分 1
level 9
英语时态不匹配是为了模糊过去与现在
2020年10月31日 13点10分 2
level 9
语法有问题,字打错了的话,屈尊将就了吧。
2020年10月31日 13点10分 3
level 9
接下来可能几个月都更不了。。各位赏赏脸,不要弃我而去了啊!
2020年10月31日 13点10分 4
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Moana Forever!
2020年10月31日 13点10分 5
level 9
不准备以moana为绝对主角,我写现代小说。纯粹为了写而写。
2020年10月31日 13点10分 6
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2020年10月31日 13点10分 7
level 12
来了来了,居然有文章[真棒][笑眼]
2020年12月11日 16点12分 8
谢谢捧场哦[吐舌]
2021年01月10日 00点01分
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