奇师，帮我看看这篇文章吧。如果按照高考水平能得多少分，谢谢！
高三年级是高中生活的最后一年，这一年中，学生们面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生课件也坐在教室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们：适当的休息很有必要。现在就请你以“A Ten-minute Break"为题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。
要点如下：
1.十分钟的课间休息很有必要
2.要注意适当的休息方式
3.你是怎样利用这十分钟的。
注意：1.开头已经给出，不计入总数
2.词数100左右
                       A Ten-minute Break
As a Senior Three student,time seems much limited.（以上为题目所给）What makes us work harder and harder is the pressure of examinations.As a consequence,a lot of students just study on the chairs even at a ten-minute break.Despite the fact that they take more time to learn,the effect on study is little and the scoles are always unexpected.
Why is it?In my opinion,it's necessary to have some relax after long-time study as it can relax our brain and make us less nervous.Meanwhile,how to relax is also essential.According to my experience,walking    outside and taking eye exercise during a ten-minute break are good ways to give ourselves a relax.After the break,we will be convenient and be more easily to learn new knowledge.By using the ten minutes to relax,we will get more than our imagination.Come on,just have a try!

A Ten-minute Break
As a Senior Three student,time seems much limited.（以上为题目所给）What makes us work harder and harder is the pressure of examinations.As a consequence,a lot of students just study on the chairs even at a ten-minute break.Despite the fact that they take more time to learn,the effect on study is little and the scoles(scores) are always unexpected(making them disappointed).
Why is it?In my opinion,it's necessary to have some relax(relaxation) after long-time study as it can relax our brain and make us less nervous.Meanwhile,how to relax is also essential.According to my experience,walking     outside and taking eye exercise during a ten-minute break are good ways to give ourselves a relax.After the break,we will be convenient(refreshed) and be more easily to learn new knowledge.By using the ten minutes to relax,we will get more than our imagination.Come on,just have a try!
1，有些许不准确的表达方式。2第二个内容要点不突出（最大的失误）。
3，主旨句不清晰。
17分左右。继续努力，哈哈。


现在作文满分多少分了？

哦，谢谢奇师了..看来我以后要多写些作文给您看了...感谢感谢！

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