【HI!EVERYONE!】A Slender Eternal {DEAN/CASTIEL}
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Just a English writting practice in today's English class.
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_NOV.24.2009
2009年11月24日 12点11分 1
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love Cass forever
2009年11月24日 13点11分 2
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A Slender Eternal
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“You seemed care him too much Dean.” Sam sit beside his computer and said, with a complicated expression.
“Did I?……look Sam, we need him, Our cute little angel……I’m afraid he is the one who have strongest power we ever met.……Trickster, our superman No.1 and 2——”
“What’s that supposed to mean? ”
“No.1 is you——with demon’s special patronage, they appoint you don’t they?……OK, don’t look at me like that,……No.2 is Jesse,” Dean sat down and open the TV, “I mean all of them above can’t help us, so we need Cass.” Simply.
Sam began to research on his computer, to sigh softly, “You know what, Dean you first to call him ‘Cass’, and maybe soon I’ll hear ‘Cassy’?” He clicked on something, “ Everyone know that we need him, but you……just more than that.”
Dean look at Sam and then laughed, “You jealous about that don’t you?”
Silent for a while. Dean stop laughing.
“Yeah, well, yes I am, I’m your brother not him.”smiled Sam, little bit angry, then turn around his computer, “Man ‘fall in love’ with angels always have ‘happy’ ending. In 1972 there is a man called Lester Johnson in Texas, he swear that he had saw an angel, after few days he was missed and left a letter to his family, he said that he love that angel so much and he’ll stay with her forever. His body was been found after a week, guess what, his eyes were burned to bloody hole, and obviously he didn’t die in peaceful.”
“You’re sweet Sammy, thanks.” Dean seemed don’t care, still watching TV.
“……Angels always have deadly lure on people——”Sam read it aloud, he knows that someone in this room gonna kill him, but he just keep going on, “Even if they are all just like jokes, think about those old chinese legend Dean, about man fell in love with goddess——”
“I’m sorry but, first, we don’t talk about Siren, second, I’m not a ancient poor chinese man and Cass maybe not a goddess, lastly, I’m not a gay.” Dean said seriously, and try not to laugh again.
“Yeah,”Sam dejected, “You’re not, of cause, fine.”
“What’s wrong with you Sam?”
Quiet.
“And by the way my love consultant, where did you find those damn things about that poor guy in Texas?”
“A mental called CRADLE, close down n 1980s.”
Dean give him a strange look, “Man you need rest, 9 hours.”

2009年11月24日 13点11分 3
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67Impala 楼主
Please give me some advices and thank you very much~
2009年11月24日 13点11分 4
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顶贴~虽然俺……英文无能……
2009年11月24日 13点11分 5
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等强人翻译全文....
2009年11月24日 16点11分 6
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楼主是要人帮忙BETA么?
"No.2 is Jesse " WHO is Jesse?
open the TV 不对,改成turned on
Sam began to research on his computer, to sigh softly...此句to sigh 不对,建议改成,"then sighed"
" Dean you first to call him ‘Cass’, " to call 不对,改成called
Everyone know 改成 Everyone knows
Well...后面此类语法错误很多,楼主自己再查一遍吧...

2009年11月25日 04点11分 8
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