Essay写作如何减少不必要的词?
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  那什么是Unnecessary Nords呢?
  ·语义赘余(多个单词表达的语义重复)
  1.accelerate the pace of economic reform
  加快经济改革的步伐?这魔鬼的步伐……
  correct:accelerate economic reform
  reason:accelerate=increase the pace of
  2.there are good harvests in agriculture
  农业大丰收?你见过工业大丰收吗?
  correct:there are good harvests
  reason:"harvests"implies agriculture
  3.the economic development in the future will...
  “在未来将会……”英文讲究简单明了,不要成天叭叭叭
  correct:the economic development will...
  reason:"will"is sufficient to express futurity
  ·单词赘余(某个单词不影响整体语义)
  1.strengthen the building of national defense
  加强国家防建设(的建设)
  correct:strengthen national defense
  2.following the realization of mechanization essay writing service on essay.lxws.net and electrification of agriculture
  随着农业机械化和电气化(的实现)
  correct:following the mechanization
  3.inner-Party democracy is a subject that has been discussed
  党内民主是一个已经讨论过(的问题)
  correct:inner-Party democracy that has been discussed
  ·介绍型名词(用某一个词介绍另一个词)
  1.reforms in the sphere of the economy
  经济(领域)的改革
  correct:reforms in the economy(economic reform)
  2.oppose the practice of extravagance
  反对铺张浪费(的行为)
  correct:oppose extravagance
  3.coupled with the factor of price instability
  再加上价格不稳定(的因素)
  correct:coupled with price instability
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