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假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭戈动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将3岁,请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信: 1.自我介绍 2.祝贺苏琳生日 3.感谢工作人员 4.索取苏琳三岁生日照 注意:1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.开头语已写好 Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! Yours truly Li Hua 
2008年10月04日 14点10分 1
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My name is Li Hua.So crazy about pandas was I from my childhood that I was always caring about the panda,"S",borned in the zoo of San Diego,America three years ago and her mother "B" through some websites.And now,"S"has been to this world for nearly 3 years,consequently,I want to sy "Happy birthday"to her and wish her will be happier and healthier.What's more,I prefer to give a thanks to the workers in the zoo.Owing to your hard work,"S" would be growing up joyfully.At last,I'm looking forward to being given a birthday photograph of "S" very much.
2008年10月04日 14点10分 2
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这其中 苏琳 和 白云 我也不知怎么表示 就干脆用了"S"和"B" 这点就别算了 您给打个分吧!
2008年10月04日 14点10分 3
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假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信要点:1.参加中文学习班 2.看中文书刊、电视 3.学唱中文歌曲 4.交中国朋友注意:1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.开头语已写好 June8,2008 Dear Peter I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Best wishes, Li Hua
2008年10月05日 13点10分 4
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To strat with,I suggest your going to take a Chinese course,which will improve your Chinese rapidly,I think.Then,it's also useful to read some newspapers,magazines and watch TV in Chinese as possible as you can.Besides,in my opinion,remember some lyrics by learning to sing Chinese songs is necessary,too.In addition,making some friends in China is also of great significance,which can help you a lot on your study.
2008年10月05日 13点10分 5
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这篇是2008北京卷的第一篇作文题,由于是图画类的,所以没法发上来,麻烦您自己去看一下题目 Last week,our class had a spring outing in the amusement park. With the sun rising in the east,we made a hiking on a mountain where growed many beautiful flowers.However,hardly had we reached the top of it,we saw plenty of rubbish lying there.Consequently,we got down to clearing and classifying them.At last,we put them into the different bins. Tired as we were,I thought,we protcted the environment.
2008年10月12日 14点10分 6
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晕啊 老师好不容易来一次 还没有看见我的这个贴啊! 郁闷阿
2008年11月07日 13点11分 7
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老师真是太忙了!
2008年11月13日 15点11分 8
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