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假如你叫李华，是一名高三学生。请你针对目前mp3/4在中学生中流行的现象，用英语给一家英语报社写信反映此事，并发表你的看法，词数120左右利：1 mp3/4便于携带 2 有利于学习，尤其是训练英语听力 3 可以下载歌曲、音乐、电影等，丰富文化生活弊：1 频繁使用可导致听力下降，有害于健康 2 一些学生沉溺于歌曲、音乐等，影响学习 3 有些学生路上边走边听，影响安全个人看法

2008年09月22日 13点09分 1

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Recently,mp3/4 is becoming more and more popular in the area of the senior students.To tell the truth,it has large amounts of advantages on its fection.First of all,it is of great convenience so that we can bring it everywhere.Secondly,we can take good advantages of it in our studies especially in training our listening and speaking.Moreover,it is also able to download music and movies,which can broaden our eyes and enrich our life.However,there are also some disadvantages for us students.To start with,using it more often will lead to our ears breaking and also do harm to the health.And some students are addicted to it,consequently study become worse.Others listen to it crazily while walking in the street,which is very dangerous. In my opinion,we should recognise both good and bad parts of it and take good advantages of it.

2008年09月22日 13点09分 2

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I'm a senior 3 students.Now mp3/4 is popular amoung middle school students.I think there some advantages about it.First,it's so little that it's convenient to carry.What's more,it helps to improve one's english listening ability.Finally,it can download music,songs and even films,which can enrich our students' life.However,it has some disadvantages,too.It is said that over using it can do harm to our hearing,which is bad for our health.Besides,some students are addicted to pop songs,music and so on both in and out of class.Some students even use it while walking on the road ,which is dangerous.In my opinio,we should make good use of it in our study instead of mainly in other things.

2008年09月22日 14点09分 3

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67老师两篇都为原作请您给看看也打个分数谢谢您！

2008年09月22日 14点09分 4

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有没有人进来看一下，吧主也行阿！

2008年10月03日 10点10分 5