这首歌终于出来了。。。 呼 一直编不出自己认为合适的旋律，所以这次要是觉得不好，那我也只能说尽力了 谢谢

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I get home without words and put down my bag、my uniform、also my perfect mask. Then there is no one else but myself and all of them wont have even a chance to regard me as an angel anymore. I release all those exhaustivity and depression filled my heart. Finally I’m the only one who are left over all of the world. Only then am I the original. Behold! The blood shedding,sorrow flowing. It’s dark all around in a state of chaos and darkness. I know you never love tenderly like they do to me. I’m just your anodyne. So I turn to cigarette I turn to alcohol I turn to rock. They seem so sweet so closely to me, a lonely helpless kid. I’m so necessary to find such anodynes. Let’s comfort let’s support.Let me own some wonder. Ijust turn to my anodynes,in a flood of tears. But you’ll never see. Nobody cares and who cares! Who cares?

啥状况？哦，您来咧~~先欢迎一下~

厌世小姐的词？我先琢磨下

- - 看到一些语法错误 我去听下

呃。。。别管它听歌吧。。。。

歌曲很不错啊

chaos anodyne - -

下次注意下发音就好了 字典很有用的 - -旋律还是很好的

limpson好久不见喜欢喜欢，旋律相当流畅啊不过感觉你的歌起伏都不大，可以加一点变化的个人意见，仅供参考：）

Ijust turn to my anodynes,in a flood of tears. But you’ll never see. Nobody cares and who cares! Who cares?结尾这段感觉很好

整体上很不错，发音需要改进