语法改错，academic style
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fenix0001 楼主
The first advantage of single-sex education is that there are fewer distractions. According to Stanberry (2010), students who are in special ages can be distracted by the other gender, when they are studying in co-education classes. Therefore, parents who are concerned about this issue prefer single-sex school. In addition, New World Encyclopedia (2012) states that single-sex education can reduce observably the influence of distraction, sexual behavior and early pregnancy on students.
2016年03月25日 11点03分 1
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SuperRichard01
is this argumentative or analytic?
2016年03月25日 12点03分 2
SuperRichard01
btw, personally, i don't think the issues of co-education you mentioned above really happens hahahaha[哈哈]
2016年03月25日 12点03分
fenix0001
@SuperRichard01 These are not my opinions, the ideas from some articles which my tutor gave to me should be used in my essay.
2016年03月26日 04点03分
SuperRichard01
@fenix0001 i think your essay should be simpler in terms of the sentence structure and vocabulary, and you really improve your arguments and ideas, remeber to not only state them but develope those ideas at the same time
2016年03月26日 04点03分
fenix0001
Teacher said that personal viewpoints were unallowed and everyting had to excerpt from those two articles. However, same vocabularies were unallowed, copy also was unallowed. DIFFICULT
2016年03月26日 05点03分
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