level 8
fenix0001
楼主
现在老师要求每次只写一个段落，但是error free。她的说法是，你如果能把一个段落写的完美，那么再多的段落也不成问题了，所以我们现在关心的是质量而不是数量。
不过好难啊，检查了不少遍了，还是拿不准，因为我最大的问题就是冠词和句子的结构，这个方面是我短板。请吧友们帮忙检查检查，这个是计入平时分的。
The main advantage of wind farms is that they are non-polluting. Wind energy resource is regarded one of the most potential environmentally renewable resource, which using of the wind power machines to convert the wind energy into the electric power. Because of without burning fossil fuels, wind farms not only can reduce environmental pollution but also save coal, oil and other conventional energy resources.
2016年03月09日 08点03分
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不过好难啊，检查了不少遍了，还是拿不准，因为我最大的问题就是冠词和句子的结构，这个方面是我短板。请吧友们帮忙检查检查，这个是计入平时分的。
The main advantage of wind farms is that they are non-polluting. Wind energy resource is regarded one of the most potential environmentally renewable resource, which using of the wind power machines to convert the wind energy into the electric power. Because of without burning fossil fuels, wind farms not only can reduce environmental pollution but also save coal, oil and other conventional energy resources.