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who lie by shiningleethere is a question kiss my lipsthere is a scear shut me upthere is a eye looking at youthere is a cow pay for thiswho lie!!!!!!!!!!!when the blinds move thier leg to the heavenhave you done such a claver chioce let the words raise you and fallat last cream at a cowboywho lie?it is not a question but a turth there is a girl put me down there is a girl raise me upthere is a lovely smell confuse my mindthere is a real feel rush my heartwho liewhen i go with the wounds keeped by grownhave you done such a kind choicelet a drop of water from your eyenot a anxious of losing your facewho liewell it is ture that don't lie
2008年07月06日 07点07分
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level 2
我暂时就看了下第一段....给楼主同学自己找下矛盾吧..你这儿句型明明用得都一样,怎么那个动词那儿又用得不一样了呢.... - -还有,scear是什么.... - -there is a question kiss my lips there is a scear shut me up there is a eye looking at you there is a cow pay for this
2008年07月06日 10点07分
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level 2
还有,暂时还是不超过第一段,就从标题来看,,我个人认为是 who lieS阿..
2008年07月06日 10点07分
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level 8
when the blinds move thier leg to the heaven 是legs么but a turth是truth么there is a girl put me down 是let me down么well it is ture that don't lie 是true么。是么??其他的不太清楚 有几句看不懂...还有应该是who lies吧 6L也说了。
2008年07月07日 10点07分
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level 8
哦 还有 先写写口水歌词咯 那样以后你再写这种词就会顺多了。
2008年07月07日 10点07分
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level 6
who lies by shininglee there is a question kiss my lips there is a scear shut me up there is a eye looking at you there is a cow pay for this who lies!!!!!!!!!!! when the blinds move thier legs to the heaven have you done such a claver chioce let the words raise you and fall at last cream at a cowboy who lies? it is not a question but a turth there is a girl put me down there is a girl raise me up there is a lovely smell confuse my mind there is a real feel rush my heart who lies when i go with the wounds keeped by grown have you done such a kind choice let a drop of water from your eye not a anxious of losing your face who lies well it is the words from heaven that don't lie
2008年07月07日 14点07分
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level 6
who lies by shininglee there is a question kiss my lips there is a scear shut me up there is a eye looking at you there is a cow pay for this who lies!!!!!!!!!!! when the blinds move thier legs to the heaven have you done such a claver chioce let the words raise you and fall at last cream at a cowboy who lies? it is not a question but a turth there is a girl put me down there is a girl raise me up there is a lovely smell confuse my mind there is a real feel rush my heart who lies when i go with the wounds keeped by grown have you done such a kind choice let a drop of water from your eye not a anxious of losing your face who lies well it is the words from heaven that don't lie
2008年07月07日 14点07分
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