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fish The fish , a very free animal.I consider myself as fish to its freedom. It can be footloose through the sea, and wagging its body at random. But now, the fish changed, she became more and more lost,and can't find her destination.Who can help her? Oh~~Nobody! Yes,she carryed great pressure. But where is the pressure from? She has no idea as well. God! why does her live so tired? Are you unfair? why is she like this ? Why ? Did it have no answer? She just wanna this thing will pass quickly ..She really doesn't like this feeling. And she really know the most important thing is to face the real first. But you know saying is easier than doing. Well,It is geting worse. Nobody can understand her. She need a helping hand to help her out from the puzzle and let her face the real bravely!! Can she? Can I? 
2005年09月19日 09点09分 1
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