Dream on-Aerosmith 持续的梦幻（空中铁匠）Everytime that I look in the mirror.每次我照着镜子All these lines on my face gettin' clearer.脸上的皱纹越来越清晰The past is gone.过去的已逝去It went by like dusk 2 dawn.就象早与晚的流逝Isn't that the way ? 难道这就是生活？Everybody's got their dues in life 2 pay.每个人都必须支付生命的费用I know what nobody knows.我知道无人知晓Where it comes & where it goes.生活将何去何从I know it's everybody's sin.我知道它是每个人的罪恶U got 2 lose 2 know how 2 win.你不知道应该如何去赢得生活Half my life is in books' written pages.我的前半生已写在纸上Live & learn from fools & from sages.活着就是向傻瓜或圣贤学习U know it's true.你知道这是真的。All the things U do,come back 2 U.一切都会回到你的身边。Sing with me,sing 4 the year.同我一起唱,为岁月而歌！Sing 4 the laugh & sing 4 the tear.为笑声和眼泪而唱！Sing with me,if it's just 4 today.和我一起唱,如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take U away.也许明天上帝就会把你带走Sing with me,sing 4 the year.同我一起唱,为岁月而歌！Sing 4 the laugh & sing 4 the tear.为笑声和眼泪而唱！Sing with me,if it's just 4 today.和我一起唱,如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take U away.也许明天上帝就会把你带走Dream On,Dream On,Dream On ! 继续做着梦！Dream until Urself dream come true.直到你自己梦想成真Dream On,Dream On,Dream On ! 继续做梦！Dream until Ur dream comes true.直到自己的梦想成真Dream On,Dream On,Dream On ! 继续做梦！Dream On,Dream On,Dream On ! 继续做梦！Sing with me,sing 4 the year.同我一起唱,为岁月而歌！Sing 4 the laugh & sing 4 the tear.为笑声和眼泪而唱！Sing with me,if it's just 4 today.和我一起唱,如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take U away.也许明天上帝就会把你带走Sing with me,sing 4 the year.同我一起唱,为岁月而歌！Sing 4 the laugh & sing 4 the tear.为笑声和眼泪而唱！Sing with me,if it's just 4 today.和我一起唱,如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take U away.也许明天上帝就会把你带走以前看到文章枪花有时候也唱mamakin的 原来就是史密斯的～哈哈 

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俺们村都这么翻译~~ 1~Every time that I look in the mirror 每当我注视镜子中的我All these lines on my face gettin' clearer 那些岁月的印记在我脸上清晰可见The past is gone 逝去的尽已逝去It went by like dusk to dawn 就象黄昏到黎明转换般自然Isn't that the way 难道这真是铁律Everybody's got their dues in life to pay 生命中所拥有的注定要失去I know nobody knows 没人知道Where it comes and where it goes 它来自何方 去向何处I know it's everybody's sin 我知道这是 每个人的过失You got to lose to know how to win 失去后才知道珍惜Half my life is in books' written pages 我的生命早已如书中所写Live and learn from fools and from sages 从傻瓜和圣人那学习生存之道You know it's true 你知道这才是真实All the things come back to you.回来吧 你Sing with me, sing for the year 和我一起歌唱 为了那些岁月Sing for the laugh and sing for the tear 为了那些欢笑 那些眼泪Sing with me, if it's just for today 和我一起歌唱 如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take you away 也许明天仁慈的上帝就会带你走Sing with me, sing for the year 和我一起歌唱 为了那些岁月Sing for the laugh and sing for the tear 为了那些欢笑 那些眼泪Sing with me, if it's just for today 和我一起歌唱 只为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take you away 也许明天仁慈的上帝就会带你走Dream On, Dream On, Dream On, 做梦吧 不停地做梦Dream yourself a dream come true. 直到你自己的梦想成真Dream On, Dream On, Dream On,做梦吧 不停地做梦Dream until your dream come true. 直到一切成真Dream On, Dream On, Dream On, Dream On, Dream On...做梦吧 不停地做梦,做梦吧 不停地做梦Sing with me, sing for the year 和我一起歌唱 为了那些岁月Sing for the laugh and sing for the tear 为了那些欢笑 那些眼泪Sing with me, if it's just for today 和我一起歌唱 只为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take you away 也许明天仁慈的上帝就会带你走Sing with me, sing for the year 和我一起歌唱 为了那些岁月Sing for the laugh and sing for the tear 为了那些欢笑 那些眼泪Sing with me, if it's just for today 和我一起歌唱 只为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take you away 也许明天仁慈的上帝就会带你走

稀烂的翻译。。

“Dream On, Dream On, Dream On, 做梦吧 不停地做梦 Dream yourself a dream come true. 直到你自己的梦想成真 Dream On, Dream On, Dream On, 做梦吧 不停地做梦 Dream until your dream come true. 直到一切成真 Dream On, Dream On, Dream On, Dream On, Dream On... 做梦吧 不停地做梦,做梦吧 不停地做梦 ”这段翻的像大学生。。。。。4级考试的水平。。。。

还是原版来得有味道！

这是手经典歌曲，EMINEM就翻唱过叫《SING FOE THE MOMENT》，次不一样但高潮调是一样的。

搂住是自己翻译的 吗 ？

这句改一下...It went by like **dusk** to dawn如晨昏更替般流转

最喜欢这歌 和他的歌词

9楼不错 11楼翻译的更传神 顶

传神就是把摇滚歌的词翻译得文诌诌？呵呵，其实还是楼主的好，贴近原来的词的风格

顶的就是你

我比较 喜欢梦想 梦想 梦想只到梦想 实现

翻译英文歌曲是最土鳖的行为。

Dream On-Aerosmith 持续的梦幻(空中铁匠)Everytime that I look in the mirror.每次我照着镜子All these lines on my face gettin' clearer.脸上的皱纹越来越清晰The past is gone.过去的已逝去It went by like dusk 2 dawn.就象早与晚的流逝Isn't that the way ? 难道这就是生活？Everybody's got their dues in life 2 pay.每个人都必须支付生命的费用I know what nobody knows.我知道无人知晓Where it comes & where it goes.生活将何去何从I know it's everybody's sin.我知道它是每个人的罪恶U got 2 lose 2 know how 2 win.你不知道应该如何去赢得生活Half my life is in books' written pages.我的前半生已写在纸上Live & learn from fools & from sages.活着就是向傻瓜或圣贤学习U know it's true.你知道这是真的。All the things U do,come back 2 U.一切都会回到你的身边。Sing with me,sing 4 the year.同我一起唱,为岁月而歌！Sing 4 the laugh & sing 4 the tear.为笑声和眼泪而唱！Sing with me,if it's just 4 today.和我一起唱,如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take U away.也许明天上帝就会把你带走Sing with me,sing 4 the year.同我一起唱,为岁月而歌！Sing 4 the laugh & sing 4 the tear.为笑声和眼泪而唱！Sing with me,if it's just 4 today.和我一起唱,如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take U away.也许明天上帝就会把你带走Dream On,Dream On,Dream On ! 继续做着梦！Dream until Urself dream come true.直到你自己梦想成真Dream On,Dream On,Dream On ! 继续做梦！Dream until Ur dream comes true.直到自己的梦想成真Dream On,Dream On,Dream On ! 继续做梦！Dream On,Dream On,Dream On ! 继续做梦！Sing with me,sing 4 the year.同我一起唱,为岁月而歌！Sing 4 the laugh & sing 4 the tear.为笑声和眼泪而唱！Sing with me,if it's just 4 today.和我一起唱,如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take U away.也许明天上帝就会把你带走Sing with me,sing 4 the year.同我一起唱,为岁月而歌！Sing 4 the laugh & sing 4 the tear.为笑声和眼泪而唱！Sing with me,if it's just 4 today.和我一起唱,如果只是为了今天Maybe tomorrow the good Lord will take U away.也许明天上帝就会把你带走

超爱这首歌!真实！

- -!ni men lai bang wo guo ji ba!!!!

好听啊~11楼翻译的好猛 0.0