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我有个同学在澳大利亚读语言学校。下周一要考试，其中有两篇英语作文。所谓语言学校，就是专门收钱的。一般考试不让你过。考试不过，就再交3000澳元。所以，特地寻求英语高手帮忙完成这两篇作文。第一篇，已经有了中文的故事梗概。写在澳大利亚发生的一件难忘的事。故事梗概：过马路时，看到一个很小的小男孩，在我的旁边，焦急地张望。于是我就带他过了马路，并自己认为自己做了一件大好事。可是那个小孩却哭了，原来是，他先跑过了马路，正在等他妈妈过来。而我却又把他牵回原来的地方。第二篇，题目有点郁闷。在讲英语的国家学英语好还是在不讲英语的国家学英语好。要求：字数250个字左右。语法尽量丰富，语言尽量生动。大家帮帮忙啊！要不然就是跟银子过不去啊！
2008年05月31日 13点05分
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hi,my friend,maybe u can use the translation of GOOGLE.
2008年05月31日 13点05分
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是啊是啊我之前电脑坏掉了现在有新电脑了而且上高中了有时候会有点小忙活动比较多我永远爱你们么么
2008年05月31日 14点05分
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忽忽```````` 这帖子里都是 贝贝豚啊凑数,凑数..........
2008年05月31日 14点05分
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It was a terrible, stormy day. People where crowded in the city, creating a canopy of umbrellas over my head. My arms and legs had goose bumps and I was soaking wet from this morning. When I arrived at the crosswalk I had to wait for at least 5 minutes before I could move. Suddenly I noticed a little boy standing next to me. He looked very anxious and scared, as if he had just encounted a ghost.When the green walk signal came up I took his hand and walked him across the road. I felt pretty good about what I did, the day seemed to brighten up. Thinking this I turned around, expecting to see him walking away but he stood there crying.I walked back slowly and asked him what he wanted. It turns out that he saw his mum on the other side of the road and was looking for her. I took his hand and walked him back to the other side of the street.I felt pretty good again. This time I knew I did the right thing instead of the total opposite of the boy's intentions. I walked back across the road and happily walked back home. As I walked I decided that today was an okay day. Other then the rain and the crowded city I had done not only one but two good deeds.
2008年06月01日 14点06分
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Learning English in a English speaking country is better because the people around you every day influence your progress. If you learnt English in France you wouldn't really be able to be undrstood and the only people you'd hear speaking English would be who you learnt/learning from.To conclude my statement I really do think the better solution is that the language you learn should be used around you. Every 365 1/4 days a year you'd hear english and you begin to understand it more properly. I declare that this statement is of my thoughts, ideas and opinions.
2008年06月01日 14点06分
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