Three Important Suggestions to Visiting Teacher Firstly, in Chinese school, the most important thing is the score. Every student just wants to raise the score, but they ignore improving ability. For Chinese students, score is even more important than skill and interest, so some students get a high score but a low ability; in addition, many parents also hope their children get a high score in the exam. For example, when I was studying in the middle school, our school hired an English teacher who came from New Zealand. She tried to improve our interest, and spent most time to teach our speaking, but we haven’t speaking exam; as a result, the parents were very angry, and then this course was canceled. So I think that the visiting teacher’s task is researching the skill of exam so that the students can get a high score in the exam. If you spend most time to improve student’s interest, maybe the students and parents will get angry. Secondly, the quizzes always are ignored because the final exam really decides students’ destiny, not quizzes. In Chinese school, some students have good quiz, but they are failed in the final exam; finally, they can’t enter the famous high school or university. Especially the university entrance exam which is so important in a student’s life. If the students get failed in this exam, they can’t enter the good university forever. In order to get a good score in this exam, the teachers always add extra classes in the evening even on the weekends. I have a suggestion for the visiting teacher. Please don’t care about the quizzes so much, and add extra classes before the last exam. Finally, Chinese students are very modest because this is Chinese traditional manner. I remembered that I had an English teacher who came from Austria in the high school. One day, she told me that my composition was very well, so I said that it was not good and I needed more hard work; thus, she was very sad. I explained that this was our manner. Every visiting teacher must know about our modest manner, otherwise you will feel very disappointed when your students say “not good” to you. In conclusion, it is Chinese culture, so the visiting teacher must understand it. 刘老师帮我看看有什么语法错误,或者论据不明确的吗?谢谢

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