下面几个句子什么意思？有错误吗？要怎样修改比较好呢？ 1）At the beginning of the first semester as a freshman, I made a lot of preparations in order to will a success in an English speech contest. （will a success对吗？） 2）I was so sad that I even thought god was unfair in that he abandoned a diligent girl and let her be reduced to a failure.（I was so sad that I even thought god was unfair in that I worked so haad but I was a failure.这两句哪句好？用in that在这合适吗？because怎么样？) 3） But for acquiring(getting) the chance to study in Japan, she determined to overcome this weak point. 用acquiring好还是getting好？ 4）在平时，用at ordinary times 行吗？ 5）我觉得这段话有点别扭，怎么改好呢？We are always being taught to be successful people, but we pay too much attention to the result of success and ignore the process to strive for it. Once facing failure, we belittle ourselves easily and don’t want to look for the reason. 6）这段话合适吗？怎么改？ Even though I haven’t won any prize so far, I still think I am a successful freshman because the process of striving for success is with confidence and willpower, which will help me succeed one day. 先谢了啊！！！