题目：
Most of the schools are planning to replace sports andexercise classes with more academic sessions. What is your opinion on thischange? How is this change will affect children’s life in your view?
Nowadays, majority of schools have emphasized the importance of students’ academic performance, thereby replacing PE classes with more academic courses. Personally, I am in favor of this practice because children’s intellectual development may benefit from this change.
Academic performance of students has played a vital role in their future development. Those who acquire better education at an early age are more likely to enter universities, which can promote their careers in the future. Asthe demand for skilled workers is on the increase today, graduates without tertiary qualifications would have less competitive advantages while finding work. Besides, it is usually believed that children are able to pick up knowledge much more easily and quickly than teenagers and adults. Furthermore, if a child received more academic education, it would lay a solid foundation for his or her future study.
On the other hand, the drawbacks caused by the lack of sports sessionsat school can be strategically addressed in other approaches. For example, schools can encourage students to do group sports activities after class. This method can not only relieve students’ academic pressure, but also improve their communicating skills. In addition, parents can also help their children to build the hobby and habit of doing regular exercises in their daily lives, which is beneficial to the fitness of children.
In conclusion, if schools focus more on cultivating students’intelligent skills, student may have more employment opportunities in their adult life. While the importance of sports cannot be ignored, sports courses are not the only source for students to have a healthy body. Students can have alternative access to exercising.

个人观点：
从文笔，遣词造句上看，楼主水平不低，可以说功底相当不错，可以和专业的媲美，甚至是专业中的优等生。
唯一的缺点，是篇章结构，第三段和第四段在表达上有些含混不清，语焉不详，和楼主在第一段段末提出的赞成的观点，在遥相呼应上明显不足。
不过，7分没问题，应该还得更高。
楼主文章中的瑕疵，是绝大多数烤鸭都会不经意间犯的。是意识的问题，也是观念上的问题，不再多叙。
向楼主学习。

一看就是上过顾家北课的啊

我觉得是6。。。个人观点。。最大的问题是观点不明确，并不扣题，一些基本错误例如student做开头，还有最后一段while的用法。。欢迎探讨

应该是6，优点是语法错误很少，但观点不明确，第三段写得不太好

并无冒犯之意，楼主这是模板吗？

百分百不可能上7，顾家北的我也研究透了，怪不得我一直是6，我们的词组句式都像完了，还真以为是我写的，看来我还是换个人吧

最后一段那个student，应该是楼主打字打太快了，while应该做连词，前面应该是逗号，还有就是分段==楼主在看手把手撒？报告类文章最好开头，中心段3段，结尾，一共5段，还有就是楼主也有很多观点重复，学术课程增加对于就业未来有帮助这个观点重复了好几次了，题目说体育类课程减少的影响楼主写的不好，应该具体化这个，也就是第三段的drawbacks，比如这类课程减少导致学生体质下降，容易生病，影响学习。码了不少字==欢迎探讨