我上的是高考点睛班，这次在作文中用了好多您给的句式。可好像都错了，希望您帮帮忙。 Ban smoking will be taken in beijing form October 1 2007.It is the point that to make"non-smoking" Olympic Games will improve people's health. There are 3 measures to be taken. first of all, the sign "ban smoking" will be posted in taxis. Moreover, if smokers should no been stoped , they would be fine for it. in addition,drivers,who have duty,can persude passengers not to smoke in the taxi. As far as i'm oncerned, it is necessary that measures should be taken to protect people's health.老师啊 如果可以 希望您能稍加解释错误原因，感激不尽~~

Moreover, if smokers should no been stoped , they would be fine for it.有问题吧?我理解是Moreover, if smokers should not stop , they would be fined for it.