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这是我花了十多节语文课的成果,鉴于本人水平有限,加之苏的歌词太“博大精深”当然还有音乐上的要求,有些语法错误或句子不通顺,请大家合理忽略,当然还要提一些宝贵意见.the fall for leaving ,the hand finally set free离别的秋终于放开后的手after you go , only fallen leaves stay with me你走以后只剩落叶陪我逗留the smile with tears ,i miss you as the wind flowing by微笑的泪让风吹走只剩忘记的自由there is no result ,i can't forgive me ,how to relief爱没留下结果恨不能将这错我怎么解脱untill the last ,i don't wanna let you go直到最后都不愿放开的手after the fall ,we have to learn to be mature秋天以后我们都要学会成熟maybe the time always stop every moment i miss you也许时间会停格在每个想你的时候only leave me alone ,your tears touched the hurt inside让你一个人走泪在我心里流过的痛thinking the past ,your smile can't take away the sadness in my heart往事回首你的笑容带不走我心中那一丝哀愁as the fall is on the way在每年秋天这个时候love till the end ,before silence missing the dearest reason爱到最后沉默消失前最眷恋的理由the quiet rhythm ,the beautiful voice but sorrow still安静的节奏风琴声动听却忧伤依旧\ the next fall ,when to come after we go\秋天的时候为我停留离开以后remember ,the promise before i made for you 还记得 曾经的承诺执着爱错的我can you recall ,the red memory floating with wind还会记得 红色的回忆在思念中飘落how did love go ,cause we are learning more爱怎样的走过 我们都懂了太多
2008年04月04日 00点04分
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copy the fall for leaving ,the hand finally set free离别的秋终于放开后的手after you go , only fallen leaves stay with me你走以后只剩落叶陪我逗留the smile with tears ,i miss you as the wind flowing by微笑的泪让风吹走只剩忘记的自由there is no result ,i can't forgive me ,how to relief爱没留下结果恨不能将这错我怎么解脱untill the last ,i don't wanna let you go直到最后都不愿放开的手after the fall ,we have to learn to be mature秋天以后我们都要学会成熟maybe the time always stop every moment i miss you也许时间会停格在每个想你的时候only leave me alone ,your tears touched the hurt inside让你一个人走泪在我心里流过的痛thinking the past ,your smile can't take away the sadness in my heart往事回首你的笑容带不走我心中那一丝哀愁as the fall is on the way在每年秋天这个时候love till the end ,before silence missing the dearest reason爱到最后沉默消失前最眷恋的理由the quiet rhythm ,the beautiful voice but sorrow still安静的节奏风琴声动听却忧伤依旧\ the next fall ,when to come after we go\秋天的时候为我停留离开以后remember ,the promise before i made for you 还记得 曾经的承诺执着爱错的我can you recall ,the red memory floating with wind还会记得 红色的回忆在思念中飘落how did love go ,cause we are learning more爱怎样的走过 我们都懂了太多
2008年04月04日 00点04分
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level 7
thinking the past ,your smile can't take away the sadness in my heart 往事回首你的笑容带不走我心中那一丝哀愁 as the fall is on the way 在每年秋天这个时候 love till the end ,before silence missing the dearest reason 爱到最后沉默消失前最眷恋的理由 the quiet rhythm ,the beautiful voice but sorrow still 安静的节奏风琴声动听却忧伤依旧 \ the next fall ,when to come after we go\ 秋天的时候为我停留离开以后
2008年04月04日 00点04分
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thinking the past ,your smile can't take away the sadness in my heart 往事回首你的笑容带不走我心中那一丝哀愁 as the fall is on the way 在每年秋天这个时候 love till the end ,before silence missing the dearest reason 爱到最后沉默消失前最眷恋的理由 the quiet rhythm ,the beautiful voice but sorrow still 安静的节奏风琴声动听却忧伤依旧 \ the next fall ,when to come after we go\
2008年04月04日 00点04分
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level 6
亲好有才~~赞个~顺便说句,这英文版的真的能唱出来,哈哈~~还挺上口的....
2008年04月04日 01点04分
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level 7
zen mo mei ren ne jin tian bu shi dou fang jia le ma?
2008年04月04日 02点04分
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level 9
LZ 你有才! {苏醒} {幸辐の菋噵咏杬只属衧乃}
2008年04月04日 02点04分
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thinking the past ,your smile can't take away the sadness in my heart 往事回首你的笑容带不走我心中那一丝哀愁 as the fall is on the way 在每年秋天这个时候 love till the end ,before silence missing the dearest reason 爱到最后沉默消失前最眷恋的理由 the quiet rhythm ,the beautiful voice but sorrow still 安静的节奏风琴声动听却忧伤依旧 \ the next fall ,when to come after we go\ 秋天的时候为我停留离开以后
2008年04月04日 03点04分
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level 7
等下,一些地方不该用过去式吗? 瓦请教下~~ 作者: 糖糖_Rainie 2008-4-4 11:46 回复此发言 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 有音乐上的要求
2008年04月04日 04点04分
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level 0
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