之前在吧里问大神怎么用英语介绍MUSE，集合多方意见，我终于写出来啦

MUSE
Today my theme is MUSIC, and I’d want to show you a band, it’s called MUSE.
Muse is a brilliant rock band, it was founded in the United Kingdom Devin County town of Teignmouth on 1994. MUSE has three members, are Matthew Bellamy(马修·贝拉米),Dominic Howard(多米尼克·霍华德), and Chris Wolstenholme(克里斯·沃尔斯滕霍姆).The Muse has just set up, they are only 13 years old.At that time, although they are young, but powerful.
They have been in the expression of energy or variety. The way that they mix classical with rock and electron is so beautiful and unique to me. You know , Matt Bellamy, the lead singer of the band, is one of the greatest guitarists and also a fantastic piano player, that guy is just awesome !! He is very interested in some strange things ,such as various conspiracy theories, alien, theology and doomsday prophecy. So their songs are always baroque and eery.
There are two most famous song, one is Survial--the London 2012 Olympic theme song, another is Supermassive Black Hole. And I love this song best.
Finally, sum them up in two words:fabulous and amused(牛逼and逗比).

Devon，classic，electronic? 虽然我喜欢说Devonshire~语法我就不说了我的作文可以用来做短文改错
——THE SUN NEVER SETS ON THE BRETTISH EMPIRE.

闲来无事帮你改改
加了“”的是我改的
I'd want to 说法是错的 可以I‘d like to 或 I want to—— and I’d like to show you a band, which is called MUSE.用which引从句感觉好多了
Muse is a brilliant rock band, it was founded in the“” Devin County town of Teignmouth "in" 1994. MUSE has three members, "they" are Matthew Bellamy(马修·贝拉米),Dominic Howard(多米尼克·霍华德), and Chris Wolstenholme(克里斯·沃尔斯滕霍姆).The Muse has just set up, "it is"(单数）only 13 years old.At that time(在那时？这短语是不是写错了）, "" they are young but（although和but不可连用） powerful.
They have been in the expression of energy or variety（没看懂这句). The way“”（that最好去掉） they mix classical with rock and electron is so beautiful and unique to me. You know , Matt Bellamy, the lead singer of the band, is one of the greatest guitarists and also a fantastic piano player, that guy is just(最好去掉) awesome !! He is “so”（very改成very much放在之后或改成so） interested in “the" strange things ,such as various conspiracy theories, aliens(复数), theology and doomsday prophecy. So their songs are always baroque and eery.
"There are two most famous songs of them, which are Survial--the London 2012 Olympic theme song, and Supermassive Black Hole—the one I love most"
Finally, sum them up in two words(有sum them up这种语法吗，有的话忽略这句话）:fabulous and amused.
以我的程度只能帮你到这了。。