急需帮助 那位神话迷可以帮帮我修改以下这篇英语文章啊,谢谢拉 The language of love Different people have different ways to show love, so the language of love is not only. When I was a child, I thought my father has no language of love and didn’t love me. Because he always focus on working and just blamed me. I remember one day I stole a candy. Then my father ordered me turned it back and tell the truth to the boss. But my mother just thought I was a child. When my leg was broken in athletic field, the person stayed with me to the hospital was my mother. He just parked his car out of the emergency room, so the doctor asked him drove it out and in case of the emergency car have no space. But my father cried, “What do you think this is the car? It is just a tour bus?” On my birthday party, my father always did something that didn’t match it. He was just busy on blowing balloons, decorating tables and did housework. He never helped me in light candles on the cake and asked me make a wish. It’s always my mother did. When I viewed photos, people asked me, “What is your father’s look like?” I almost don’t know how to answer it. Because he just took photos for others. I have a lot of pictures with my mother, but seldom with him. I still remember one day, my mother asked him to teach me cycling. I told him don’t to release his hand from my bicycle. But he said, “It’s the time to release my hand.” When I fall, my mother wanted to help me. While my father stopped her. I felt very angry, so I decided to avenge him. I climbed the bike again and cycling it by my own showed to him. He just smiled. After I went to college, I always write letters to my mother. Except gave me money, he sent me a short letter and told me that because of I didn’t stay at home, the house was always very clean. Every time I called to home, he seems that want to talk with me, but at last, he just said, “I asked your mother to have a talk with you, he missing you every day.” At this time, I always want to ask him, “How about you?” When I left home, my mother always cling me tightly. While my father just help me hold up the suitcase to bus and left without words From child to adult, I always hear him said, “Where did you go? When were you go home? No, never do it. As time goes on, I began to understand and feel my father actually love me very much. When I was younger, I couldn’t understand my father’s way to show love, even thought he is very cold and don’t know what is love, how to love a person. Now I became an adult, I realized I was wrong. Actually, he is known how to love than me. He understand “action speak loudly than words.” So he was always do and seldom say. He let me learned to be honesty, brave. Faced to the difficulty, I should never give up. I still want to repeat that the language of love is not only one. My father let me know the most beautiful language of love actually is no words. So, please learned to read people’s language of love around you. You will gain more love than before. 

作者： 慧尾追随 2008-1-14 00:17 　 回复此发言 -------------------------------------------------------------------爱之语对于如何来表达爱，不同的人有着不同的方式。所以说，能显示爱的语言也不止一种。当我还是个小孩子的时候，我认为我的父亲没有表达爱的语言也不爱我。因为他常常专注于工作和责备我。记得有一天我偷了一颗糖。父亲让我把糖果还给老板并向他道歉。但是母亲却认为，我只是个孩子。当我在运动场上受伤的时候，陪伴我去医院的人也是母亲。而父亲只是把车停在急诊室外面，后来医生让他把车开走，不然急救车就没有地方停了。但是父亲却叫喊着：“你为什么说这是车？这是一辆旅行巴士！”在我的生日聚会上，父亲也会做一些不合时宜是事情。他只是忙于吹气球，装扮桌子做一些家务。他从来没有帮我点过蜡烛或者叫我许愿。这些都是我的母亲做的。当我看照片的时候，人们问我：“你父亲长的是什么样子的？”我甚至不知道如何回答，因为他总是帮别人拍照。我有很多和母亲一起的照片，和父亲的却很少。我仍旧记得有一天，母亲让父亲教我骑自行车。我让父亲不要松开抓住自行车的手，他却对我说：“是松手的时候了”。当我摔倒的时候，母亲想要帮助我。但是父亲拦住了她。我感到很生气，所以我决定要报复他。我爬上了车子，自己骑上去向父亲炫耀。他只是笑了笑。当我上了大学后，我只给我的母亲写信。除了给我钱的时候，他才会写一封短信告诉我，因为我不在家，家里总是很干净。每当我打电话回家，看上去他很想和我说话，但是到了最后，父亲只是说，“我让你母亲接电话，她每天都很想念你。”每次这个时候，我经常都会想问他：“那你呢？”我离开家的时候，母亲总是紧紧的贴着我。但是父亲只是帮我拿着手提箱上车，然后无言的离开。从小到大，我总是听到父亲说：“你去了哪里？你什么时候回家？不，不要那样做！”随着时间的流逝，我开始明白也开始感受父亲真的是很爱我的。当我年轻的时候，我不能理解父亲表现爱的方式。甚至认为他是冷淡的，不懂得爱也不知道怎么去爱的一个人。现在，我是一个成年人了，我知道我错了。事实上，父亲比我更懂得怎么去爱。他明白“说到不如做到”。所以他总是做的多，说的少。他让我学会了诚实，勇敢，还有面对困难时永不言弃。我仍然要说，爱的语言不止是一种。我的父亲让我知道了无言的爱是最美的表达方式。所以，让我们学会去读懂周围人爱的语言。这样会比以前得到更多的爱。------------------------------------------------那啥的，完全是无聊没事做随便翻译了下，水平完全不行你将就的看看吧，*___*