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As is known to all of us computer is wildly and commonly used by more and more people.2 However many of them lost themselves in the Internet,that is a unreal world.3 Futhermore they get more and more independent for the Internet.
4As a matter of fact the spent most of their time on surfing the Internet ,taht dirrectly leads them become very indifferent.5To start with human is an intelligent creature who can use and invent tools.6 For one thing computer is created by us,we shouldnt dependent on computer too much.7 For a nother thing we could invent more useful and interest mashines like time machines.8 Last but there is no means at least human beings have the abilities such as touch smell listen,that means we need to go out to make contact with others , which will have a great binifits for our health.
9 In a word we can draw the conclusion of that there is a neccissary for us to shake off the Internet and heal ourselves built a better home for our offspings and creat a hamonious socioty.
2014年05月11日 02点05分
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4As a matter of fact the spent most of their time on surfing the Internet ,taht dirrectly leads them become very indifferent.5To start with human is an intelligent creature who can use and invent tools.6 For one thing computer is created by us,we shouldnt dependent on computer too much.7 For a nother thing we could invent more useful and interest mashines like time machines.8 Last but there is no means at least human beings have the abilities such as touch smell listen,that means we need to go out to make contact with others , which will have a great binifits for our health.
9 In a word we can draw the conclusion of that there is a neccissary for us to shake off the Internet and heal ourselves built a better home for our offspings and creat a hamonious socioty.