level 2
其实吧,我这个人平时听英文歌也不想翻译什么的,近两天忽然心血来潮,就把Sam这首歌小翻译了一下~
可能因为个人理解啊,阅读说话习惯啊什么的,不同人看法不同,有异议之处欢迎指出~ 押韵啊用词啊什么的有问题还请大家指正啊~
PS:令人郁闷的是Don’t Want An Ending 这句一直没有想好怎么翻译,虽说它和歌里任何一句词都不用押韵,但还是好苦恼...... 我目前只想到了“结局请别开始”,但是好别扭...... 这里集思广益一下,求更好的翻译~
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2014年04月22日 15点04分
1
level 2
先放上英文版
"Don't Want AnEnding"
I don't wanna fall out
But we're all out of time
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
In one day
No way you'll be mine
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
Ooohhh...
My heart is running on empty
One more day and then we go
Yeah, the time goes on now
Don't ask me how
I don't know
We'll be home tomorrow
But a thousand miles too far away
Say you won't forget and I'll be okay
At least tonight
It's just you and me and honestly
That's everything I need
I don't wanna fall out
But we're all out of time
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
In one day
No way you'll be mine
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
Tonight's the countdown
'Til the day we're not around
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
And you're gone
And we're on with our lives
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
No, don't want an ending
The days turn to hours
And it's just a moment before they go
I'm scared to say goodbye 'cause
What's after that
I don't know
And as years flew past us
If we lose track or lose the fight
I will search forever to find the way back to tonight
Where it's just you and me and honestly
That's everything I need
I don't wanna fall out
But we're all out of time
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
In one day
No way you'll be mine
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
Tonight's the countdown
'Til the day we're not around
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
And you're gone
And we're on with our lives
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
We say, "See ya, later"
But I know there's no way
We're around here again
And every until next time
Feels like one back punch line
And I don't want that again.
[x2]
I don't wanna fall out
But we're all out of time
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
In one day
No way you'll be mine
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
Tonight's the countdown
'Til the day we're not around
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
And you're gone
And we're on with our lives
(Is this over?)
(Don't want an ending)
No, I don't want an ending
Don't want an ending
Don't want an ending
2014年04月22日 15点04分
2
level 2
接下来就是翻译啦~
最后几段重复什么的我就木有写......
Don’t Want An Ending
我并不想错过
但时光流过指尖
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
仅一天
你怎能留我身边
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
我心在一点点空虚
仅一天光阴又怎够
时间慢慢流走
别问为何
我不懂
明日各回家中
却又隔千山和万水
保证你不会忘却以给我慰藉
至少今夜
是你我之间 坦诚相见
不需更多诺言
我并不想错过
但时光流过指尖
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
仅一天
你怎能留我身边
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
从今夜数倒计时
我们还能一起几日
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
人离去
生活依旧继续
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
看日化为小时
仅转眼间它们便飞走
再见无法出口 只因
下一秒
我猜不透
似水年华流过
若联系已断 路途漫漫
我会扭转时光寻回温暖
回到今晚
只有你我 坦诚诉说
不必奢求更多
我并不想错过
但时光流过指尖
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
仅一天
你怎能留我身边
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
从今夜数倒计时
我们还能一起几日
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
人离去
生活依旧继续
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
说有幸再相逢
但我知道不可能
再次聚首于此
每一句下次再见
竟像一行笑言
我不想再告别如此
我并不想错过
但时光流过指尖
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
仅一天
你怎能留我身边
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
从今夜数倒计时
我们还能一起几日
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
人离去
生活依旧继续
(Don’t Want AnEnding)
2014年04月22日 15点04分
3
level 2
嗯,谢谢楼上~
主要是因为最近看见篇很文艺的歌词就翻译成这风格的了......
I don't wanna fall out 那句的确是我意译了一下,没想到别的方案,求建议~
2014年04月23日 14点04分
5
level 15
给你赞,fall out直译是很奇怪
已经算“达”了吧
2014年04月24日 11点04分
6