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2007年12月17日 12点12分 1
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To组员:这应该是最终的剧本了,不会有太大改动,最好把自己那一幕的词打下来。道具如果谁能帮忙提供一下告诉Annier,马天慧,贾丹,王雪纯。谢谢!!Chapter1服装:Bob,Scrooge,可可西服Fred: 便装3Beggars:白黑(还有一个颜色没想好)保持上下一色,头上用围巾裹好(类似阿拉伯)身上最好用披风(好换衣服)道具:请柬,蜡烛BOB正在用烛焰暖手(坐),s过来,生气。S: What --are you doing there,Bob?B(立即站起):sorry…sir. I’m just warming my hands, it’s so cold in here.S: HUMBUG! too cold? Am I paying 100 yuan a week for just warming your hands?B: Oh,nonono. I’m mean it’s too cold to write, my hands are freezing…S: what? Too cold to write? SHEP!! if you were working harder, you wouldn’t be cold any more!B: But sir…S(手指BOB): Stop it!! Now, listen! If I hear another word from you, you will go where it is really cold.(吹灭蜡烛,转身出去,坐到大桌子前)BOB 2秒钟后追出去S: Well, what do you want to do?:Tomorrow….I…I…mean it’s Day….so…S: so what?you want to have one day off?right?B:It’s quite convient ,sir.S:白日梦!B: But, sir. It’s only one Christmas a year, don’t you….(被打断)S(手指Bob): Listen, NO-WAY!B:I know,sir.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------音乐:风声3 beggars.敲门S: well, who’s that ,again?B1:my dear sir.B2: my concur sir.B3: my handsome sir.B1:Merry Christmas.B2:Happy New Year!(作揖)B3:God bless you!B123: Please give us a little money!S: A little money? HUMBUG. That’s a dream! You 3 rubbish!Don’t dirty my room! Get out.(B123被赶出,倒在街头)++音乐:小白菜B1:oh, so cold…(倒下)N: the first beggar died of coldness.B2: oh, so hungry…(倒下)N: the second beggar died of hunger.B3:Hey….you two!(试呼吸)My friends are all died,so…(撞击头部,倒下)N: the last beggar died of sadness.they are all died ,for Mr Scrooge.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------S: um…Christmas, nothing.F(哼歌入,手持请柬一张): Christmas,Christmas. Merry Christmas ,my dear dear uncle! GOD GOD save you!S: AHH.HUMBUG!!F:christmas is a humbug?uncle?You don’t mean that, I‘m sure!S:I do . Merry Christmas, what reason do you want to merry? look how poor you are!F: But look how rich you are. Please, Uncle that’s not kind!+纸上的一大段话(have dinner with us together tomorrow. and here is an invitation cards for you!)S(撕掉请柬):I’m not!! You have your own way to celebrate, and I have too. It’s none of your business ! Now, you can go!---Fred go---
2007年12月17日 12点12分 3
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chapter2 Jaco :一身纯白3ghosts:面具(马),披风(邹),木乃伊(航)Chapter2scrooge自言自语N: Then the night is on. Mr scrooge is going to sleep.S: good ! they are all gone. well good time for sleep!!音乐:午夜钟声N: in the midnight, someone is knocking at the door.J敲门1S翻身J敲门2S(翻身起来,朦胧):AH?who’s there?J(轻轻飘入): my scrooge. Wake up…S: you—are—Jacob Marley? don’t you died?J:It’s not necessary,though. Mr scrooge, Have you remember the 3 beggars in your offices today?S:I know,I…I…I just kicked them out.J:the wrong choice. They are all died, I just telling you they turn to 3 ghosts to you on the christmas Eve…well I’m gone.S: Jacob?ghosts?(掐脸)It’s a dream, I think.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------音乐:G1尖叫声S从床上翻下G1:hahaha…Mr scrooge,we meet again!S:who’s that?G1:Don’t worry.It’s only two of us,and now I ‘m the ghost of Christmas past.S:you?G1:shut your mouth. come with me.hahaha ,and I will show your sth about the past…----------------------------------------------------------------------------------G1(把S带到门口): well, it’s here. I’ll put what you are.ha…S: Oh, it’s me! And my last girlfriend…. ----------------------------------------------------------------chapter3girl:便装young Scrooge:西服玫瑰Chapter3音乐:GOOD BYE MY LOVE.G坐在桌前,Y进来,手持玫瑰于身后。Y: Lisa, do we?Y: Lisa, do we…,hey,Lisa.?G: Oh, no, that’s the end. It’s --sure. Another idol was taken your place.Y: What…are you kidding? What idol…G:A golden one. You know the mean. Nothing to say…foreverY: Nothing to say? Why? My dear Lisa, what’ wrong?G: Don’t say anymore. It’s impossible, all have ended.Girl低头写东西不理sY: Sorry, Lisa. But I really don’t know, what’s up? What do you want? I can give you all. I have -- money.G(拍案而起): Money, again money! You have nothing --but money. What do you have else? You can just think of the money. You don’t care me anymore!Y: My dear Lisa. That’s you mean is my fault? I mean there is nothing wrong-- in making money…G: Nothing wrong? Come off it, Mr. Scrooge. That isn’t what life is about. All your hopes has flown into money.Y: Lisa, money is nothing wrong, but my heart is belong to you. I’ve not changed被打断(towards you.) G(怒): Money, Money, Money, all the money! There is only money in your eyes and in your mind. But remember, my dear scrooge, I’m not a wallet, I don’t want to keep money for you! You’ve changed. It’s better for us separated. Now YOU CAN GO!!!JUST GO!!!Y: Oh no Lisa. Keep it for me. Forgive me! 拿出玫瑰----------------------------------------------------------------------------------S(疯狂状):Oh,dear. Why show me this!!show me no more!! YOU….G1:hoho….wish you happy! and I’m gone!!G1消失-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------G2:HAHAHA….Mr Scrooge!! HAHAHAS:you? The second begger?G2: HAHAHA,yes,but now, I;m not!! for you!Now, say nothing ,I’ll show you more!! HAHAHA
2007年12月17日 12点12分 4
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这一幕剧本插在四楼之后Chapter4G2: Well.I think it’s there. (Mrs Crachit 围着围裙,织着毛衣,在一旁帮忙卷毛线团儿)L: Father is late .I think it’s because he walks slower than he used to,as of late.C: I ‘ve known him walk with----- I ‘ve known him walk with Tiny Tim upon his shoulder, very fast indeed.L: That’s true.C: But he was very light to carry, and his father loved him so. That was no trouble, no trouble at all.L: Here he is !(Bob 背着病重的Tiny 回家)B: What a beautiful goose you ‘ve got here. I’m sure never such a goose was cooked. And oh , what a wonderful pudding ! A merry Chritmas to us all, my dears, God bless us !C: All right , let’s pray together before dinner .(全家PRAY Tiny 的声音很虚弱,并颤抖着) Bob: I pray on ChrismasThat the lord will see me throughI pray on ChristmasHe’ll show me what to do.Mrs.: I pray on ChristmasHe’ll help me understandAnd I pray on ChristmasHe’ll take me by the hand.Little girl: I pray on Christmas That he sick will soon be strong I pray on ChristmasThe Lord will hear my song.Tiny Tim: I pray on Christmas That God will lead the way And I pray on Christmas He’ll get me through another day.Bob: I pray on ChristmasI pray on ChristmasI pray on ChristmasHe’ll get me through another day.Mrs.: I pray on ChristmasAll our problems goanna be worked outI pray on ChristmasGod’ll show us what love’s about.Little girl: I pray on Christmas To do your will each day And I pray on Christmas That ‘ll be with you in heaven someday.Tiny Tim: I pray on Christmas Oh, the sick will soon be strong I pray on Christmas The Lord will hear my song.All: I pray on ChristmasThat God will lead the wayAnd I pray really pray on ChristmasHe’ll get me through another dayHe’ll get me through another day!T(剧烈咳嗽几声):and for the last,I want that Turkey…Ma... (死掉了)C:Tiny !!Oh,Tiny . my son Tiny oh no!!L:Tiny!My dear Tiny .It’s not ture!!B:(节哀顺便.盖上白布): Tiny 在天堂会很幸福的。圣诞节,Santa不要我们悲伤。-----------如果效果达不到的话可简化B : And we should not forget Mr. Scrooge. To Mr. Scrooge, and thank him for this feast C: No ,not to Scrooge , that mean, hard ,selfish old man. You know he is , Bob. Nobody knows it better than you do. He makes his clerk work so many hours and pays you so little .We never had money to buy medicines for Tiny , or he won’t be like this. My poor boy , God bless him .my dear Tiny .my poor Tiny .----------------------------------------------------------------------------------S ,G2在门边S: Santa , how could Tiny be like that ? What happened? Tell me that was not true ! Have mercy!G2: Ho , ho .ho . Scrooge, these are the shadows of what may happen in the future.S: It may happen , but it doesn’t have to , does it ? Heaven, be praised for this! hear me ! I’m not the man I was. I’ ll change my life. Believe me.G2: Ho ho ho . Good Ebenzer Scrooge. It’s Christmas Eve .And I have the last scence for you.HOHOHOG2消失-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------G3:HAHAHAHA.Hi!!are you Mr Scrooge?S(惊吓状):ya?yes….I am.G3:It’s OK,now.Listen,I the 守护神 for you when you died.S: What? You? Will say with me –forever?G3:Ah,yes!and now,I will show what you like in the future.----------------------------------------------------------
2007年12月17日 12点12分 7
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annier_fath 楼主
再不行的话明天去拷吧
2007年12月17日 12点12分 8
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刚听,就觉得哪歌太幼稚了,适合高宇澄唱,实在不行换一个吧.
2007年12月17日 12点12分 9
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Pai飞9楼的
2007年12月17日 13点12分 11
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