【虎原创  露相随】偶写的一篇关于某虎的英语作文
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Lu Hu , a outstanding singer, loveed music very much. He was born on April 24 , 1986 in He Nan . He is stardying Hu Nan TV unirersity. When he was a small boy, he very liked music. In 2004, Lu Hu joined Star College, and got good grades. In 2005, he took part in shangliangxinzhubo. In 2007, he joined a program, called Happy Boy. Although he didn't win the prize, he had lots of fans. I'm one of the fans. He dream is to become a outstanding singer and host . I love him veru much!
2007年12月08日 11点12分 1
level 7
写的不好 大家不要见怪~ (*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
2007年12月08日 11点12分 2
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loveed 错了...loved...
2007年12月08日 11点12分 3
level 7
话说我好没看让我晕的英语文章了..表过我还是看完了!~~!!~~!
2007年12月08日 11点12分 4
level 9
呵呵,有些语法错误..不过还是不错的..鼓励!!!
2007年12月08日 11点12分 6
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哦哈哈‘★~☆~...偶看懂了额☆.`.~~~☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞蚕宝宝家谱☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞ 妈妈:忽忽  干妈:七七  小妈:小妖  小小妈:小琪 临时妈妈:小爱     临时爸爸:糖糖 远房妈妈:醒吧泪 妈;馨悦姐姐:小雨,久久,不不,木木,婷,糖果,记忆,完美   哥哥:小琳,小E,小乖   小姨:小m,                姑妈:妞妞        LP:小蛆                 LG:乖乖         表姑:夏天                姐夫:小三,小珂 (久久滴LG)    大姨:大璐                大姨夫:小桐,还是小乖 小姨子:小殊  舅舅:还是小E               舅妈:弦子 侄女:小H                 大婶:霜 单车:珠珠                二姨:星焱 ☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀ 
2007年12月08日 11点12分 7
level 9
不如小孩子们都写写...还练习了英语
2007年12月08日 11点12分 8
level 7
那我不是小孩了...哈哈!!~·!~!!·!!~!~
2007年12月08日 11点12分 9
level 9
=`~~.≈=+恁就素偶老师=~.‘~=+膜拜下=~.=+☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞蚕宝宝家谱☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞☜☞ 妈妈:忽忽  干妈:七七  小妈:小妖  小小妈:小琪 临时妈妈:小爱     临时爸爸:糖糖 远房妈妈:醒吧泪 妈;馨悦姐姐:小雨,久久,不不,木木,婷,糖果,记忆,完美   哥哥:小琳,小E,小乖   小姨:小m,                姑妈:妞妞        LP:小蛆                 LG:乖乖         表姑:夏天                姐夫:小三,小珂 (久久滴LG)    大姨:大璐                大姨夫:小桐,还是小乖 小姨子:小殊  舅舅:还是小E               舅妈:弦子 侄女:小H                 大婶:霜 单车:珠珠                二姨:星焱 ☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀ 
2007年12月08日 11点12分 10
level 9
哈哈,星焱...跳走的真快!!蚕宝宝一定跑不掉
2007年12月08日 11点12分 11
level 1
unirersity大学应该是university吧!你上初二吧!我也写过咱俩写的差不多!嘻嘻
2007年12月08日 12点12分 12
level 8
我还看不懂呢~呵呵`
2007年12月08日 12点12分 13
level 8
看的东看的懂~
2007年12月08日 12点12分 14
level 1
看不懂,顶一下吧!
2007年12月08日 12点12分 15
level 9
嘻嘻,偶不由自主的修改一下下~~Lu Hu , a outstanding singer, loves music very much. He was born on April 24 , 1986 in He Nan . He is studying in Hu Nan TV Unirersity. When he was a young boy, he liked music very much. In 2004, Lu Hu joined the Star College, and got good grades on it. In 2005, he took part in the New Hosts of Shangliang. In 2007, he joined a program which is called the Happy Boys. Although he didn't win the prize, he had lots of fans. I'm one of the fans. His dream is to become a outstanding singer and host . I love him very much!
2007年12月08日 13点12分 16
level 9
Lu Hu , a outstanding singer, loves music very much. He was born on April 24 , 1986 in He Nan . He is studying in Hu Nan TV Unirersity. When he was a young boy, he liked music very much. In 2004, Lu Hu joined the Star College, and got good grades on it. In 2005, he took part in the New Hosts of Shangliang. In 2007, he joined a program which is called the Happy Boys. Although he didn't win the prize, he had lots of fans. I'm one of the fans. His dream is to become a outstanding singer and a host . I love him very much!
2007年12月08日 13点12分 17
level 9
........第一句是客观现实,应用一般现在时态~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~small不可修饰人,换成 young或者 little~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~小露珠写的很不错,加油加油哦!偶素大一英语播音专业的,@&%*习惯哈...加油,露珠都是很棒棒的!陆虎加分+++++++++++++++
2007年12月08日 13点12分 18
level 7
我英语不好谁能翻译一下啊
2007年12月08日 13点12分 19
level 9
还有啊是an outstanding
2007年12月08日 13点12分 20
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