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旗队刘晓小
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RT。。。圣诞放假了无聊啊TUT。。。找人求陪聊也得有个手段是不是。。。所以把我两天前英语课上写的诗发上来供大家瞅两眼~
第一次试图写rhyme+rhythm的诗,光顾着rhyme+rhythm了词啊什么的都很低端了。。。求勿喷求指导
Snow on a School Day
I loved snow on a school day,
cold, white outside while children play.
I went to help with a snowman,
they stopped me before I got a chance:
"Keep your dirty hands off my snowman,
you slug!" I dare to go no more.
That night I went to a snowfight,
with my cousins, under streetlights.
Boys didn't like making snowmen,
neither did they care about my hands.
"Only girls cry for their snowmen,
we're men so we fight for ourselves."
Happily the day came to an end,
the 7-year-old girl lay on her bed.
She gave up building her snowmen
instead she opted to snowfight.
Years later she would say:
"I hate snow on a school day."
2013年12月21日 19点12分
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第一次试图写rhyme+rhythm的诗,光顾着rhyme+rhythm了词啊什么的都很低端了。。。求勿喷求指导
Snow on a School Day
I loved snow on a school day,
cold, white outside while children play.
I went to help with a snowman,
they stopped me before I got a chance:
"Keep your dirty hands off my snowman,
you slug!" I dare to go no more.
That night I went to a snowfight,
with my cousins, under streetlights.
Boys didn't like making snowmen,
neither did they care about my hands.
"Only girls cry for their snowmen,
we're men so we fight for ourselves."
Happily the day came to an end,
the 7-year-old girl lay on her bed.
She gave up building her snowmen
instead she opted to snowfight.
Years later she would say:
"I hate snow on a school day."