07北京（五P383）（按100字要求写的！）Dear Harry, How are things going? Last Monday, between two students in our class existed a monitor election. One was Liu Dong, the other was Wang Hong. To start with, Liu Dong made a speech, claiming his determination and what he would devote to do for our class. Then it was Wang Hong’s turn. She tired her best to make us trust and be for her. Excellent as they were, we had to choose from them. Having thought carefully, we put the voting paper in the box. What made Wang Hong cheerful was that she got thirteen supports more than Liu Dong. Consequently, she won the monitor election. We clapped our hands for her, wishing we would cooperate successfully. This is our exciting monitor election. Best wishes, Liu Hua1.“先写的正常的句子再变”不好吗？ 2.高考时作文写多长时间为好？平常怎么训练？像你讲课是那样好吗？3. 我的“高级语法哪使用不恰当”？是太过中文式？还是使用的错误？4. 什么叫“ 先从简单和正常的开始，一定要先保证短句的正确”？是先不练长句，把简单句练熟了后在练长句？还是就按我现在这么做？我的短句哪不对？ 刘奇哥哥，你是不是快“风”了！谢了！

其实第一个和第四个问题差不多，因为长难句就是把简单的句子根据一定的逻辑关系进行组合同时使用高级语法，从简单正常的开始就是让你先练习写
正确的
简单句然后合并，这样能确保你的句子不少或者不多成分自己练习写作文时要有时间限制，上课时老大讲的是思路和方法，他每一句都会有很多说法，但是你写的时候不一定完全用到，只要恰当使用就能增加亮点

Dear Harry, How are things going? Last Monday, between two students in our class existed a monitor election. One was Liu Dong, the other was Wang Hong. To start with, Liu Dong made a speech, claiming his determination and what he would devote to (删掉do)do for our class. Then it was Wang Hong’s turn. She tired her best to make us trust and be for her. Excellent as they were, we had to choose(only one of them) from them. Having thought carefully, we put the voting paper in the box. What made Wang Hong cheerful was that she got thirteen supports more than Liu Dong. Consequently, she won the monitor election. We clapped our hands for her, wishing we would cooperate successfully. This is our exciting monitor election. Best wishes, Liu Hua2楼说的没有错，高级语法的使用不是越多越好而是恰当是最好的。30分钟之内必须完成，有的使用的太过了，就是太正式了，短句还可以。听二楼的没错。

谢谢老大的肯定阿....以后会继续帮你忙的hoho看我多好