这是英文歌词： What about the life that you were dreaming ofWhat about the picture in my headWhat about the love that we were fighting forIs it still somewhere alive or is it deadHow could we ever go so wrongI always thought that we were strong(Chorus)But if you leave my world tomorrowAnd if you leave me cold tonight(If you re gonna leave me cold tonight)(Do you really wanna see me cry)I m gonna live my life in sorrowAnd you ll forever see me cry(If you re gonna leave me cold tonight)What about the home that we were building upWhat about the colours in our heartsWhat about the kids we should be playing withShould we leave this fantasy into the darkYou are as shining as the sunYou are the place where I belong(Chorus)Do you share the pain insideDo you know how much it bitesDo you mind to watch me fallDo you care for me at all(Chorus)I m gonna live my life in sorrowAnd you ll forever see me cry(If you re gonna leave me cold tonight)But if you leave my world tomorrowYou ve got to leave me cold tonight 

And if you leave me cold tonight (If you re gonna leave me cold tonight）这话很难译呢..........

如果你在今天这冷夜里离开了我是否可行？

是alex翻译take me to your heart 这张专辑吧....那你就顺便先把这首歌翻译了吧......

如果今夜你在寒萧的夜里离我而去。。。如果你将要在今晚离我而去？

也许把离开改成抛弃更好???

我觉得这里leave不能理解成离开或者抛弃应该理解成leave me alone里的leave

leave me alone里的leave什么意思？我翻译的时候按远离算的.........

那就是扔下了

If you leave my world What about the life that you were dreaming of 你所梦想的生活会是什么样 What about the picture in my head 在我脑海中会是怎样一副画面 What about the love that we were fighting for 我们为之奋斗的爱情要如何 Is it still some where a live or is it dead 是仍然存活在某处还是死去How could we ever go so wrong 怎么会这样 I always thought that we were strong 一直以为我们都很坚强 But if you leave my world tomorrow 可是如果你明天就离我而去 And if you leave me cold tonight (If you're gonna leave me cold tonight) 可是如果你明天就离我而去 或者是在寒冷的夜 (Do you really wanna see me cry) (你真得愿意看我哭泣吗 ) I'm gonna live my life in sorrow 我的生命中将只剩下悲伤 And you'll forever see me cry 你会永远看到我哭泣 (If you're gonna leave me cold tonight) What about the home that we were building up 我们所建立的家该如何 What about the colours in our hearts 我们心中的色彩会怎么样 What about the kids we should be playing with 我们应与之嬉戏的小鬼要怎么办 Should we leave this fantasy into the dark 我们该离开这些走进黑暗吗 You are as shining as the sun 你就像明亮的太阳 You are the place where I belong(baby) 我只属于你(宝贝) 我只属于你(宝贝)You are the place where I belong(baby) But if you leave my world tomorrow 可是如果你明天就离开我 And if you leave me cold tonight 如果是在寒冷的夜离我而去 (If you're gonna leave me cold tonight) (Do you really wanna see me cry) (你真的忍心看到我哭泣？Do you share the pain in side 你是想分享我的这些悲伤，还是站在一旁Do you know how much It bites 我知道我有多痛吗？Do you mind to watch me fall你真的不会在意我坠落吗？Do you care for me at all 你真的关心我吗？But if you leave my world tomorrow And if you leave me cold tonight (If you're gonna leave me cold tonight) (Do you really wanna see me cry) I'm gonna live my life in sorrow 我的生命将只有悲伤And you'll forever see me cry 你将永远看到我哭泣(If you're gonna leave me cold tonight) But if you leave my world tomorrow You've got to leave me cold tonight

翻译的不错~~~但我还想讨论一下if you leave me cold tonight我觉得zpzan说的对应该按leave me alone处理可中文怎么说啊

离弃？

回raly：我这个人不善表达意思，那个leave也就那个意思（废话）。应该没有实际意义的，或者相当与中文的“让”，说的不甚准确，但可以肯定和上面一句leave my world里的leave有很大差别

那么注重LEAVE的字面意义干嘛...if you leave me cold tonight还不如直接翻译成 让我今夜孤身一人..

个人认为 What about the life that you were dreaming of 这句还不如翻译成 我们曾经梦想中的生活该怎么办

What about the love that we were fighting for可以直接翻译成 我们从前为之奋斗的爱情该怎么办3

I'm gonna live my life in sorrow 我将在悲伤中度过一生

and you'll forever see me cry 你将只能看到我那张悲伤的脸

What about the colours in our hearts我们曾经的美好的记忆该怎么办