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07天津 How to Protect Our Eyesight Eyesight is of great consequence. So short-sighted are more students in classes, we must take action to protect it. Here some advice is given. First and foremost, what does harm to our eyesight is that we keep reading when feeling tired, in consequence we had better rest more. Moreover ,the light is nothing but suitable. Reading with walking or in the sun is a terrible habbit. What’smore, doing eye exercise often not only protects our eyesight ,but also makes us get rid of tiredness. Last but not least ,never can sleeping enough be ignored. Our eyes ask for rest strongly. If we were hardly short-sighted, we would be more healthy. 刘奇哥哥问你一个问题:建立错体本有用吗?为什么每次开会时老师都大吹特吹他忒别好?而我又为什么每次建立错体本后就学的特别死,而且还很浪费时间?
2007年08月19日 06点08分
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Eyesight is of great (是significance吧)consequence. (你是先写的正常的句子再变的吗?There are so many short-sighted students in classes that we must take action to protect our eye-sight.)So short-sighted are more students in classes, we must take action to protect it.(Here is some advice.) Here some advice is given. First and foremost, what does harm to our eyesight is that we keep reading when feeling tired,(. In consequence,) in consequence we had better rest more. Moreover ,the light is nothing but suitable. Reading with walking or in the sun is a terrible habbit. What’smore, doing eye exercise often not only protects our eyesight ,but also makes us get rid of tiredness. Last but not least ,never can sleeping enough be ignored. Our eyes ask for rest strongly. If we were hardly short-sighted, we would be more healthy. (If we had protected our eye-sight, we would live a hearlthier life.)有的高级语法使用不恰当,先从简单和正常的开始,一定要先保证短句的正确,至于你的问题,只要做到错题不错第二遍就可以,至于形式不是那么重要。
2007年08月20日 06点08分
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