前言：她不是中国人的说，叫johanna，是我一年以来的舞伴，追过一段时间未遂，目前我俩很纯洁，别胡思乱想的。。。
你们看写的不是那么差吧。。。
Today is your birthday,
A very special day
The day you shall still celebrate
After decade’
To commemoratethis amazing date,
When you were born to create
An amazing world with amazing dream’
So let’s celebrate
This special day.
You have always been the most beautiful shooting star,
Owning all the fancy charm,
Inyou are the wishes of glory and love,
Youkeep the world from getting odd;
Youkeep hopeless man’s heart warm.
Todayis your birthday,
Avery very special day,
The happinessyou brought far beyond what words can say,
That’swhy I give thousand thanks to the fate
Forsending you my way.
Andthat’s why we shall celebrate
Thisspecial day.
The sixteencandles you blew,
and the sixteen years that flew
All the strength that you drew
and the happiness you knew
All the old things and new
Cometogether as a wonderful girl
Andthat’s you
JoJo.
Todayis your birthday,
Avery very very special day,
Idon’t know what else to say,
Mayyou celebrate,
Andcheer!
May we all celebrate,
Thisspecial day.

给自己先挽个尊好了，度娘妒忌所以把格式改得面目全非——

求女生姓什么……说楼主写的有些乱，但词用的挺好，格式确实是面目全非，押韵也挺好但不够巧，楼主心情可以理解。充分理解。帮你顶一个。

感觉有点长了，不过还可以~

生快，发展吧少年

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发展吧+1

谁说学校没网？起个名字想那么多何必？石鬼面具回复给层主..不是你..谢谢

The sixteencandles you blew
有没有人跟我一样看到这里笑了......

lz
好厉害的