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文章是看图说话,其实际内容就是“守株待兔”的意思 Once upon a time,onthe field was aman hoeing ,with the sun shining brightly .He was working hard everyday .A rabbit came into his sight .Unexpectly ,it having bumping into a tree died,lying on the ground .What made him cheerful,he would have a rabbit for dinner .Owing to a fabuluo dinner,he hold the view that hecould catch a rabbit everyday for dinner .The next days ,he stays at the tree ,waiting for the rabbit's bumping into the tree .Without hoeing long as he stayed ,no rabbit appeared.What was worse ,all the crops dead. the story hold an view that something happened by accident cant be believed as a rule.You must work hard.
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