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Lost and Found Once upon a time, a circle lost his wedge. He was so desperately to be perfect, he started his mission to find the lost piece. He hoped to become complete once again very soon, but things don't appear to be that easy. His missing part caused him to roll extremely slowly and it was such a draining task that he had no progression. While he was rolling and searching one day, he thought: why don't I make some friends on the way? It's gonna be a long time until I find it, I should use this time wisely and make something out of it. So he admired the pretty flowers on the way, chatted with worms, enjoyed sunshine on its pale smooth skin as he continued rolled on his way. Even though he made new friends and other doings, he still kept looking for the way to complete himself. Until one day, he did found it, the scatted piece, his last key to his perfection, now he got it. All his newly made friends congratulated him, praised him, and are all proud of that they have a friend who's perfect. With the lost piece found, he was able to roll fast once again, and that was what he did. However once he started rolling, he ignored everyone around him. He was puzzled at first about why it was so quiet suddenly, then he realised that he rolled too fast to see all the beauty of life. With that in mind, he reassembled him self into several small parts, left all of them behind with no regrets, and marched towards his new journey, seeking but not finding the perfection of life. Why, isn't this is true meaning of happiness of life? We are all like that circle, kept rolling and rolling, seeking for the perfection of life. When one day we do find that, is the day we dispose it, because in the process of the seeking, we are perfect. wizedz 
2007年07月30日 12点07分 1
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2007年07月30日 12点07分 3
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2007年07月30日 12点07分 4
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wizedz 楼主
沙发。。。板凳。。。地板都让我占了。。。大家怎么参观呢。。。还是我让出来吧。。。我真是善良透顶了。。。
2007年07月30日 12点07分 5
level 14
小白草‘‘不用感谢我很有耐心的看完噢‘‘‘嘎嘎过来‘‘‘‘‘
2007年07月30日 12点07分 6
level 14
~LMF来阅一下尽管批评某草‘‘‘‘‘= =
2007年07月30日 14点07分 7
level 0
才子阿言简意赅= =---某忆
2007年07月30日 15点07分 8
level 1
星 你给我压力了— —内个`````小草,故事想的挺独特的哈~小小年纪果然思维活跃— —既然星要求,那我就BT的来挑点不知道是不是问题的问题‘‘‘第一段末 but things don't appear to be that easy. 改成 but things appeared not to be that easy.第二段 he continued rolled on his way.改成 he continued (to roll)/(rolling) on his way.he did found it 改成 he did find it第三段 and are all proud of that they have a friend who's perfect.改成 and were all pround of their friend who's so perfect.暂时没了,如果是对的被我改成错的了,大家伙就当没看到啊 ○.●
2007年07月31日 05点07分 9
level 14
也真的诶这几个错误小草按道理不应该犯的噢...该打!嘎嘎‘‘‘粗心的家伙‘‘‘LMF辛苦仂嘿嘿‘‘
2007年07月31日 06点07分 10
level 14
- -||这文是某草昨天才赶出来的因为今天截止了‘‘嘎嘎~~谁叫他之前只顾玩游戏来着...呆会他上线后自己来改改‘‘嘎嘎‘‘‘话说现在已经很多人看了电影了LMF啥时候看?
2007年07月31日 07点07分 12
level 1
现在的孩子啊-◎-我没得看呐,电影院根本就摆着占地的想坐个把小时去温州市区看,又怕到时候路都找不到看着吧里的看完回来个激动样 刺激我啊你说会不会有碟的啊?当然是说正版的哈~
2007年07月31日 07点07分 13
level 14
看来同是天涯沦落人....肯定有的但是恐怕一时半会正版碟还出不来..叹.....我想去成都看搜了下钱包连车费都8够....
2007年07月31日 07点07分 14
level 1
我去温州来回算上打的要70左右‘‘‘还有个问题是我没时间 汗·我不出意外是要买碟看了......
2007年07月31日 07点07分 15
level 14
我不出意外也跟你的不出意外一样了.....
2007年07月31日 08点07分 16
level 6
哎..星期5我也要在补习班上演讲...不知道怎么写呢
2007年07月31日 13点07分 17
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